I'd say Volcanic Elemental is the best of the bunch. I also like Primal Fury.

Cool card, feels very Rogueish. I'd change the artwork, though.

I don't like that your card uses Counterfeit Coin instead of The Coin just to fit the competition criteria. Even if the concept itself is good, I'd go with a different idea.

All of those are excellent, probably my favorites so far. I'd say Set the Table! is the best one, since it combines flavor and an interesting effect.

That said, an Epic Class card for an expansion that had none might be a bit off-putting for some people, so I'd make it a Rare just in case.

I think you're right about the balance. I'd say I prefer a 4 mana version with Rush.

I like your card, but I think you should make Nezzie herself a Mech.

Sure, you'd have to drop this cool artwork, but I think the card overall would benefit, since you wouldn't need to modify the token.

Volcanic Guardian is too slow, I kind of like Aldor Adjudicator but getting two extra Libram of Hopes is kind of a lot. I really like Primal Fury but you could probably make it 3 mana or maybe even 2 mana and be okay. "Feral" cards are really bad, so you would probably be fine making them more accessible.

I am not 100% sure about the power-level on this card because I don't know how easy it would be to trigger multiple combo effects in a turn. But getting multiple Deadly Poisons feels like a lot of extra damage. Again I am not sure if it would be problematic  because I don't play rogue, but just something to keep in mind.

Ishanah is interesting as a control tool, and I like that she makes use of bad cards. I also like that she doesn't support Rez Priest. But don't forget to put a period after the Taunt. Something Fishy is interesting, but I feels really hit-or-miss. If you are fighting a Murloc deck it just wins you the game, if you are playing a Murloc deck I guess it can be used to slightly upgrade your board, and otherwise it does literally nothing. Set the Table! is really cool, but probably too powerful.

I really like it, but it is probably too OP as it is now. You should definitely either remove the Rush or make it 4 mana. Personally I would rather remove the rush, but making it 4 mana is fine.

First off, I would reduce her mana cost to 6 or maybe 7. It isn't worth spending 4 mana on a Fel Cannon, so I don't see why it would be worth it to spend 8 mana on two. Also, to avoid adding that extra line to the Fel Cannons you could just change the character to a mech. But aside from that I really like it.

No offense, but the card as it is seems pretty pointless. Why would I spend 8 mana and two cards summoning Ragnaros and not trigger his ability when I could spend 8 mana and a single card to summon Ragnaros and also trigger his ability. I would both reduce its mana and make it a battlecry. If you wanted to make it a little more interesting, you could do something like Mogu Cultist and make them 1 mana but make it so that you need to control 3/4 of them.

I want to like it, but I am biased against Warglaives of Azzinoth so I don't like it. But I can put aside my opinion for a bit and provide constructive feedback. I like Illidari Blacksmith better than Tony because it is simpler. It does a single effect, and then it is done. I like the first version better because I feel like it doesn't have as much potential to swing the game in an un-fun way. It gives the opponent more warning, and it is also slower. I would however change the Battlecry to only hit a minion so that it helps aggro decks a bit less and also maybe reduce it's stats.

I like the idea of a choose one effect, I also like first option a lot, but the second option is really bad. Gift of the Wild is a bad card, and going through an extra step to cast it isn't going to help. I feel like as it is now people are never ever going to pick the second one. I would find some other druid spell instead of Gift of the Wild. I would also have it cast both options just for simplicity.

It is funny, but I am not sure it is very realistic. I think you could do something else cheese themed that makes EVIL Cable Rats, but just making a block of cheese be a minion is a little odd. Also, I would reduce the Health to make it similar to other eggs.

First off the wording is wrong, it should say "Whenever a friendly minion dies this turn, give your Hero +1 attack. Outcast: Add 'Command the Illidari' to your hand". You always say the thing that triggers the effect before the effect. I do also think that Coordinated Strike would be better just to make it a bit smaller and cheaper to cast. Other than that it looks great!

Beast Training Manual is pretty cool, though I am not sure about the balancing. Surprise Element is funny, but not too realistic (btw it should probably be named "The Element of Surprise") and it also needs a period after the Taunt. Weather Forecast is tied with Beast Training Manual for my favorite, but I do think it would be kind of under-powered seeing as Shaman doesn't have a lot of draw and it is very possible to draw these at the wrong time, and if you draw them at just the right time it could make a lot of players salty. All in all I think Beast Training Manual is the best, but I just don't feel too god about being able to play with 4 Kill Commands

I like that you can get a super early Ragnaros, but it's way too similar to Blood of The Ancient One to catch my eye. But who knows, maybe people doesn't care about that.

I think I prefer DH Tony, but since you usually can only attack once per turn, I wouldn't make it a legendary.

If you still decide to make him a legend, you could use Varedis, who is one of the first five Blood Elves who became a DH.

I think the card doesn't break the rules, but it seems a bit dull, IMO. Dunno, the fact that Gift of the Wild is basically a mass Mark of the Wild makes the flavor a little bit better, but I'm still not fully convinced.

Kinda funny. Now you can make a cheese omelette in an Egg Deck :)

It's a simple card, but the flavor is good and people might like it.

I don't like that the card is worded in an unsual way so that it can work with the generated card. I mean, the interaction itself is fine, but the wording is a bit unintuitive.

How about making the card a minion with the following text: "Whenever a friendly minion dies, give your hero +1 Attack. Outcast: Add 'Command the Illidari' to your hand. Of course, the minion would need to be understated. If you make this change, the generated card could be Coordinated Strike instead.

All your cards have superb flavor, really. I think I'd go with Surprise Element because its flavor is so funny I actually laughed IRL, even if the effect isn't the most interesting thing in the world. Weather Forecast is also cool, but its high RNG factor might be off-putting for some people.

@linkblade91 - Love the idea behind Primal Fury because I like cards that incorporate cards that don't see play in Standard (hence my design as well). I think it could maybe even less since you still have to play the cards that are added. 

@Demonxz95 - Really hope we get an expansion soon that focuses on Combo for Rogues. Always thought it was one of the class identities that hasn't seen much support. With that said, card is balanced and fair. Also the art is really cool.

@KANSAS - Like the re-design of it being a Rogue card. Checks the boxes of things Rogues want. 

@BloodMefist - Love Something Fishy for the context of the card but seems like a major bummer for one deck in the meta and everyone else it doesn't really affect as you probably aren't wanting to target your own Murlocs. With that said, I think the best design is High Priestess Ishanah but could be a problem in Wild for Divine Spirit / Inner Fire as that one card puts 5 high health minions on the board at one time. 

@Xarkkal - Agree with your statement about dropping the Rush if keeping it at 3 mana. Raising the card to 4 mana and keeping Rush is the idea I would personally like to see. 

@Pokeniner - The idea of the card being a Mech is probably best since the change for Fel Cannons would be something unique that I don't believe has happened in the game yet. 

@Nirast - It's one of those cute combos that have been seen in the game before but just not seeing why anyone would try and run this when we have broken stuff in the game that can get Rag out without a combo to set it up (Big Priest, Shaman, Rogue). I feel like the card could have at least Chillwind Yeti stats as the combo more than likely would be hard to pull off.

@anchorm4n - Illidari Blacksmith #2 scares me as you are going to get a free 3/4 taunt as we have seen that most DH aren't playing Outcast cards without its effect (plus I think it has to add a card to your hand or shuffle it in the deck so don't think this one works). The first design is better since you have to still play the Warglaives. The legendary is neat but as we already saw with Priestess that 7 Health is an issue and this card in my mind is even scarier of an idea that un-nerfed Priestess.

@grayghost39 - Not sure if the first option works since it doesn't add the card in some way and just casts it. You could have it where the card added to their hand has a discount and raise the base cost appropriately.

@CovenantKevlar - Think the card is great flavorwise and having 3 extra Lackey generators would be worth it for certain classes. It does run into the issue eggs have in the game right now and this does seem possibly stronger than eggs. Yes you have to play the Cable Rats but you also are getting 3 of them where eggs just summon a minion on death. Not sure if that is just my take but seem like it could be stronger for a value Lackey deck.

@MrRhapsody - Love Weather Forecast but definitely change Blizzard to a Shaman spell. Maybe Earthquake would work better.

CursedParrot

Mistress of Fate is interesting and I like the idea.  1 needs to be in parentheses, because it's referring to a cost. I think that with 2 of these in your deck, you can have 8 Plot Twists, which might be too many and make the quest too easy to complete.  At the same time, the Plot Twist takes up one of your draws and the deck needs tools to be able to survive to complete the quest.  I think I like it with 2 copies shuffled in and some sort of casts when drawn effect instead of the cost reduction.

I don't think that Cause of the Light provides enough of a reward unless your deck has mainly neutral cards, which makes the quest hard to complete and provides less of a reward since your deck will not have many cards left by the time it is completed.  I think it I prefer having it shuffle 10 or 15 copies into your deck instead with a higher requirement (maybe 5 or 6 paladin cards).  It would help Pure Paladin the most but still supports decks that want to run neutrals.

bigcums

I like the card, but does the healing need to be restricted to spells only?  I think it could open up more possibilities if it could work with all of your healing, even if means increasing the requirement. Also, try to arrange the text so that Lightlord is not the only word in the fourth line in the card. The text looks a little crammed in to me.

Pokeniner

Seems really solid.  I like seeing classes get support for archetypes that haven't been seen yet.

Cg8889

The text seems really crammed in to me, so it doesn't look great from an aesthetic perspective, but there's really no way to fix it othet than changing the effect.  Other then that, I like how the abilities work with one another.  It provides a way for Demon Hunter to deal with bigger minions that doesn't undermine its weaknesses.

MrRhapsody

I think that the Beast Training Manual might be underpowered because both Play Dead and Tracking are 1 mana spells and Play Dead would be unless if you're not running any deathrattle minions.

I like Surprise Element the most in terms of gameplay, but I like the Weather Forecast the most in terms of flavor and creativity.  I think they are both very nice cards.  For Weather Forecast, Casts when Drawn doesn't need quotes.  I don't mind Blizzard as one of the spells because it's an effect that could fit in Shaman, even if its a mage spell, but I think that Rain of Toads could also work since Lightning Storm is already a board clear.  

KANSAS

I like the card and the flavor. I'm not sure what makes it worth epic rarity, or more importantly why is WANTED! an epic?

Looking at the comments, let's just say the dentist is working on your behalf, but it wants to keep the coin for itself so it's going to give you a counterfeit coin. 

CovenantKevlar

I like cheese, so I'll be likely to eat this before the rats come XD

3 might be a little too many, I think it would be better with 2 rats at 2 mana.

grayghost39

The second option seems really slow.  Maybe have it add 3 or 4 Mark of the Wild spells to your hand instead, so it works like Gift of the Wild but with the option to play it in chunks?

anchorm4n

I think of the first version of Illidari Blacksmith, but with higher stats and taunt instead of the battlecry, would be best.  I feel like the battlecry doesn't relate to the outcast ability and makes the card feel like its trying to do too much at once.  The second might be okay balance-wise but it might scare some people.  

The legendary card being able to add multiple copies of Twin Slice into your hand starts heading towards multiple card generation, which is supposed to be one of Demon Hunter's weaknesses.

Nirast

I don't like that you have to wait one turn to get Ragnaros to deal damage.  I think this would be better as a battlecry.  Other than that, nice card.

Xarkkal

I really like the 3 mana version without Rush.  It makes a good parallel with Lightforged Zealot.

BloodMefist

High Priestess Ishanah is way too powerful.  There's room to make Boommaster Flark better, but not by THAT much.  That being said, I like this one the most out of the three.

Something Fishy functions more like a tech card.  I could see it used in some murloc decks to chain Hungry Crabs. It should say battlefield instead of field.

Set the Table! I like because it can potentially give each discard a free 3/3, as well as potential discard targets later on.

Demonxz95

Toxin Alchemist might be a little hard to use, but I enjoy the design.  I don't much to say other than its a solid card.

linkblade91

All three cards seem pretty good to me.  There's not one in particular that I like the most. Volcanic Guardian would be better off as a neutral imo.  I don't know what makes it a shaman card.

 

linkblade91: I like Primal Fury using underused basic/classic cards, but it isn't a very interesting effect overall.  Not a fan of Aldor, I feel like it just does too much and has a decent statline to boot.  I really like Volcanic Guardian since it supports chaining elementals, something I wish we got more of. I think it would be better if it were a statted a bit more aggressively or given taunt since it si currently 7 mana for a big dude that doesn't affect the board state. 

Demonxz95: A nice simple and flavorful effect, I really like it.  It can't do any degenerate pop-off shenanigans since you typically only get 1-2 combos off in a turn and it's pretty easy to remove.  Not sure there's much I would change about this card.

KANSAS: I like the effect, but the flavor still doesn't mesh quite well with me.  A Counterfeit Coin doesn't make a lot of sense since you're paying him to do something.  Keeping the name as "Back-alley Dentist" would make the Counterfeit Coin make a bit more sense and further fit the flavor into Gadgetzan.  

Xarkkal: I agree that the only real change this needs is the removal of Rush.  I was initially worried that it would be too strong even without Rush, but then I remembered how weak RR was as a set and that Hunter got a '4 mana 7/7' secret card in Uldum.  Remove Rush and I think this is good to go!

Pokeniner: I always liked Felcannon and was sad that Mech Warlock never got more support, so I'm a big fan of this design.  That said, I do think Boomsday is not the right set for her.  Since Mech warlock was not been supported in any existing set, I think you should use a unique/custom set emblem.  I also think "Nether-borg Nezzie" over "Nether-cyborg Nezzie" rolls off the tongue a bit easier.  Balance-wise, I think she could be 7 mana with the other Mech requirement, or remove the Mech requirement and make her a 5/3 as an inversion of the Felcannons and as a weaker statline.

Nirast: Not sure how I feel about this card.  I like other methods of summoning Ragnaros, but this opens the door for some potential abuse cases (you list Priest and Mage as options) and doesn't feel in-flavor.  Ragnaros isn't comprised of his servants, he is his own entity.  I think it could be reworked to a battlecry with an elemental on the board or elemental played last turn requirement, a bit like how Shaman got that card to summon Al'Akir.  Something like "If you played 4 Elementals last turn, summon Ragnaros" as a starter idea.

anchorm4n: Really like Beast Tamer's effect.  Wording I think would be 'if youre opponent control 3 or more minions' rather than 'has'.  I think a name like 'Menagerie Tamer' or 'Menagerie Beast Master' would work since it is in line with other beast cards from ONiK.

grayghost39: Seems too strong right now, an alternative reading could be 4 mana 3/3 Battlecry: Give a minion +2/+2 and Taunt, which is similar to a down-costed Bonemare.  I think keeping the current effect but increasing the cost to 5 would work, or making both options add to your hand to slow it down.  With the ladder, you could also lower the cost to 3 or increase its stats.  You could also play around with it adding two Marks for extra flexibility.

CovenantKevlar: Like the flavor and the effect.  Also like how it is a much slower Lackey card, meaning it is much harder to abuse.  I think the wording needs to be changed a bit though.  Reworded to "Add three 'EVIL Cable Rats' to your hand" frees up more card space is more consistent with existing wording.

Cg8889: I like Illidari Strategist, but agree that the card does feel a bit cluttered.  That said, I can;t think of a way to get the same effect while cutting down on card text. If it were consistent with other cards, it would have even more text and say "Add a 'Coordinated Strike' spell to your hand".  You could alter the effect by upping the cost and making it cast Coordinated Strike instead of adding it to your hand.  Although it is the same as saying "Summon three 1/1 Illidari with Rush", it does cut down on card space significantly.

MrRhapsody: I like the flavor of Beast Training Manual, but it's a bit of a boring effect.  I like Surprise Element for the play on words, but think it is not interesting enough.  Weather Forecast is fantastic and super flavorful.  I agree with some other comments that Blizzard is a bit weird since it is a Mage spell and think that Rain of Toads could be a decent substitute.

bigcums: I really like this effect and how it encourages control Paladin.  I think restricting it to spells might be too difficult since many Paladin healing effects are not spells.  I think you could raise the required healing but remove the spell requisite and it would be good to go.  That said, I also understand wanting to keep the healing at 8 cuz Rag, so maybe a different restriction like 8 health to your hero?

CursedParrot: I like Mistress of Fate the most out of the two, but the wording should be a bit different.  It should be "Shuffle three 'Plot Twist' spells into your deck".  This is more consistent with other cards and takes up less space.  Not a fan of the quest since it seems a bit janky to use.  You'll likely complete it by the time you need your Pure Paladin cards to come online, but including neutral cards just to turn them into really strong buff cards seems jank. It also might reach a critical mass of Hand of Adals that is too strong.

grumpymonk: I like Drill Sergeant the most of the three.  It is nice to have a predictable discover-esque effect that your opponent can more reasonably interact with.  I am a tad scared of Heroic Strike generation to mid-range/aggro warrior, so I might consider increasing the cost and stats to push it further from aggro's grubby hands.  Clever Marksman is interesting for his synergy, but makes me go 'meh' when I look at him.  Briggite is interesting and a close second for me, but it doesn't hit quite right for me compared to Drill Sergeant.

bananenparty: An interesting effect, but I dont think it will work.  You could just shove this into Zoo and not care about your opponent getting Fireballs because you dont cast any spells.

Demonxz: I like it, but i would like it more if it costed (2) and had lower stats. Whirlkick Master was 2 mana and even yet it rarelly triggered its effect ( at least from my Arena experience), so a 2/2 or 2/3 stat line and a (2) cost would be better IMO.

Xarkkal: Yeah, 4 cost seens more fair and realistic. Removing Rush would just make it a little less insane, at 4 it would be at the same power level as Hyena Alpha, or maybe just a little bit higher. In general, i like it.

Nirast: Good callback to Blood of the Ancient One, i like it, but you probably should remove the line break after "into".

Grayghost: I don't know, Gift of the Wild is pretty bad even when generated, most of the time it i'll be just a 5/5 with Taunt. At about Power of the Wild or Wild Growth? It i'll make it less flavourful but also more versatile and useful.

CovenantKevlar: Three seens like a lot, it can complete the Shaman quest in one shot in the right situation. What about change it to " At the end of your turn, add an EVIL Cable Rat to your hand."?, it would make it more balanced and flavourful, passing the idea that the Cheese is smelling and is slowly attracting the rats.

KANSAS: Looks better than the old one, and if you remember, i was one of the few who liked the old one back in the "I Miss my X" comp. Honestly, i don't know how people didn't get the flavor from it, he does his work in a painful way, yet the client gets satisfied and pay him for his job, but since he works for you, the coin goes to you, that simple. Also, haven't people ever heard of golden teeths?

Cg8889: I Like it, but that effect is worth of an Epic card or even a Legendary but with more effects IMO. Not complaining tho, it's just a sugestion.

Pokeniner: Thats a lot of stats for 8 mana, even with the restriction. But i don't think it is broken, just really powerful, worth of making Mechlock a real thing, and as a Mech Warlock enthusiast ( for real, i played my Mechlock homebrew a lot when Boomsday came out) i realy liked it!

Bigcums: I'll be honest, i'm not a fan of [Hearthstone Card (Jan'alai) Not Found]'s wannabes, i have a little runt on them, and since i'm suspected to evaluate it, i'll leave it to others to evaluate.

CursedParot: Really loved Misstres of Fate, but giving the Plot Twist Casts When Drawn would make a easy 5 star for me. Also, you should put () between the 1.

grumpymonk: Clever Marksman is my favorite, it's a good paralel to Violet Spellwing. I like Drill Sargent too, but it seens a little unrealistic, and for Brigitte Abbendis, as i said above, not a fan of [Hearthstone Card (Jan'alai) Not Found]'s wannabes.

Bloodmefist: I like them all, but i like Set the Tabble a little more. It's balanced, flavorful and also funny. Good job on all of them.

Banananparty: Seens kinda meh, it i'll most of the time be just a 5 mana 5/7, and i'm not a fan of legendaries with nothing but raw stats. At about make it a 4 mana 5/7 or 7/5 and make it cast the fire ball right on your face? It would not only make it even more bulky for the stats, but also have a double edge blade, dealing a lot of damage to you, but also sinergizing with cards like Molten Giant, Hooked Reaver, Duskbat, etc.

anchorm4n: Really liked it, very flavourful. As you asked, i'll give some name suggestion, at about Menagerie Tamer, Circus Beastmaster, Flamering Sideshow, or maybe a mix of those? I don't know, at least i've tried.

linkblade: I'll would go with Primal Fury, it fits Druid more since board clears is not ecxatly their strenght and the flavour is amazing. Took me a while to realise (I'm a little sleepy today), but when i did i fell in love with it, nice job.

@Linkblade91

I like Primal Fury, it seems like it'd synergize well with attack druid and big hand druid. If you want to make it a bit more proactive, you could make it add 1 copy of Claw, Bite, and Pounce to your hand, so that you could use Pounce that turn if you don't have extra Mana.

@MrRaphsody

I feel like Volcano might not be a good idea, since it can affect your own board. Other than that, you card seems really cool!

@Bigcums

If you want the requirement to be harsher, maybe it could be "If you've restored Health 8 times this game" so that it can't be easily fulfilled with a single Lay on Hands.

@Bannenparty

I'm not sure about Antonidas. Basically you'd want to run him in a Warlock deck with few spells to get a slightly overstated 5 drop, which seems really weak. However, if he were 4 Mana he'd be ridiculously strong. Maybe it'd be better if he was something like a 5 Mana 5/7 with "Battlecry: Shuffle a 'Pyroblast' spell into your opponent's deck for each spell in your hand" so that he has a real downside that could be leveraged as an upside in certain cases.