All Comments

linkblade91: I like Primal Fury using underused basic/classic cards, but it isn't a very interesting effect overall.  Not a fan of Aldor, I feel like it just does too much and has a decent statline to boot.  I really like Volcanic Guardian since it supports chaining elementals, something I wish we got more of. I think it would be better if it were a statted a bit more aggressively or given taunt since it si currently 7 mana for a big dude that doesn't affect the board state. 

Demonxz95: A nice simple and flavorful effect, I really like it.  It can't do any degenerate pop-off shenanigans since you typically only get 1-2 combos off in a turn and it's pretty easy to remove.  Not sure there's much I would change about this card.

KANSAS: I like the effect, but the flavor still doesn't mesh quite well with me.  A Counterfeit Coin doesn't make a lot of sense since you're paying him to do something.  Keeping the name as "Back-alley Dentist" would make the Counterfeit Coin make a bit more sense and further fit the flavor into Gadgetzan.  

Xarkkal: I agree that the only real change this needs is the removal of Rush.  I was initially worried that it would be too strong even without Rush, but then I remembered how weak RR was as a set and that Hunter got a '4 mana 7/7' secret card in Uldum.  Remove Rush and I think this is good to go!

Pokeniner: I always liked Felcannon and was sad that Mech Warlock never got more support, so I'm a big fan of this design.  That said, I do think Boomsday is not the right set for her.  Since Mech warlock was not been supported in any existing set, I think you should use a unique/custom set emblem.  I also think "Nether-borg Nezzie" over "Nether-cyborg Nezzie" rolls off the tongue a bit easier.  Balance-wise, I think she could be 7 mana with the other Mech requirement, or remove the Mech requirement and make her a 5/3 as an inversion of the Felcannons and as a weaker statline.

Nirast: Not sure how I feel about this card.  I like other methods of summoning Ragnaros, but this opens the door for some potential abuse cases (you list Priest and Mage as options) and doesn't feel in-flavor.  Ragnaros isn't comprised of his servants, he is his own entity.  I think it could be reworked to a battlecry with an elemental on the board or elemental played last turn requirement, a bit like how Shaman got that card to summon Al'Akir.  Something like "If you played 4 Elementals last turn, summon Ragnaros" as a starter idea.

anchorm4n: Really like Beast Tamer's effect.  Wording I think would be 'if youre opponent control 3 or more minions' rather than 'has'.  I think a name like 'Menagerie Tamer' or 'Menagerie Beast Master' would work since it is in line with other beast cards from ONiK.

grayghost39: Seems too strong right now, an alternative reading could be 4 mana 3/3 Battlecry: Give a minion +2/+2 and Taunt, which is similar to a down-costed Bonemare.  I think keeping the current effect but increasing the cost to 5 would work, or making both options add to your hand to slow it down.  With the ladder, you could also lower the cost to 3 or increase its stats.  You could also play around with it adding two Marks for extra flexibility.

CovenantKevlar: Like the flavor and the effect.  Also like how it is a much slower Lackey card, meaning it is much harder to abuse.  I think the wording needs to be changed a bit though.  Reworded to "Add three 'EVIL Cable Rats' to your hand" frees up more card space is more consistent with existing wording.

Cg8889: I like Illidari Strategist, but agree that the card does feel a bit cluttered.  That said, I can;t think of a way to get the same effect while cutting down on card text. If it were consistent with other cards, it would have even more text and say "Add a 'Coordinated Strike' spell to your hand".  You could alter the effect by upping the cost and making it cast Coordinated Strike instead of adding it to your hand.  Although it is the same as saying "Summon three 1/1 Illidari with Rush", it does cut down on card space significantly.

MrRhapsody: I like the flavor of Beast Training Manual, but it's a bit of a boring effect.  I like Surprise Element for the play on words, but think it is not interesting enough.  Weather Forecast is fantastic and super flavorful.  I agree with some other comments that Blizzard is a bit weird since it is a Mage spell and think that Rain of Toads could be a decent substitute.

bigcums: I really like this effect and how it encourages control Paladin.  I think restricting it to spells might be too difficult since many Paladin healing effects are not spells.  I think you could raise the required healing but remove the spell requisite and it would be good to go.  That said, I also understand wanting to keep the healing at 8 cuz Rag, so maybe a different restriction like 8 health to your hero?

CursedParrot: I like Mistress of Fate the most out of the two, but the wording should be a bit different.  It should be "Shuffle three 'Plot Twist' spells into your deck".  This is more consistent with other cards and takes up less space.  Not a fan of the quest since it seems a bit janky to use.  You'll likely complete it by the time you need your Pure Paladin cards to come online, but including neutral cards just to turn them into really strong buff cards seems jank. It also might reach a critical mass of Hand of Adals that is too strong.

grumpymonk: I like Drill Sergeant the most of the three.  It is nice to have a predictable discover-esque effect that your opponent can more reasonably interact with.  I am a tad scared of Heroic Strike generation to mid-range/aggro warrior, so I might consider increasing the cost and stats to push it further from aggro's grubby hands.  Clever Marksman is interesting for his synergy, but makes me go 'meh' when I look at him.  Briggite is interesting and a close second for me, but it doesn't hit quite right for me compared to Drill Sergeant.

bananenparty: An interesting effect, but I dont think it will work.  You could just shove this into Zoo and not care about your opponent getting Fireballs because you dont cast any spells.