In regards to your statement about hypothetical archetypes, that does definitely apply to me. I had thought about Taunt synergy for Demon Hunter just randomly somewhere, and in my set, The Secrets of Volcania, I decided to just go do it.
It's not immediately obvious, but I think the idea of Taunt synergy for Demon Hunter fits perfectly fine as they actually have quite a lot of Taunt cards. Despite the fact that Demon Hunter has been around for 2 years now (yes, it really has been that long, I know it sounds crazy), I don't think their class identity is completely defined yet and there's still a lot of places it can go. Deathrattles in DH were thought of as weird at first, but now they're just a perfectly normal part of the class identity. Taunt synergy could go the same way. If it encourages Demon Hunter to play in a different way that isn't just gaining Attack and hitting the face, then that sounds like a job well done to me.
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Incidentally, dual-class Quests were also one of the biggest things of the new set and it happens to fit perfectly in theme with this week's CDC.
Wow, this does not have the participation I thought it would have. This isn't even a particularly complicated theme, so I'm not sure why.
In the case of Faceless Envoy, "[name of minion]" represents dynamic text that changes on the card itself as the game goes on, kinda like how Pathmaker works.
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Linkblade91
I do quite enjoy the concept. I would probably prefer it if it changed with each draw as opposed to just each turn, but this is perfectly fine.
BasilAnguis
Oh hey, I remember this. Unfortunately I'm not so sure that this counts, but if it does, then it'd be kinda cool.
I do want to point out a text inconsistency here though. Balgruf says "reunite with her" whereas Yara just says "reunite". It'd look better if you choose one of these two wording conventions and used it on both cards.
Anchorm4n
For the sake of safety, I think maybe raising the Cost to 7 is a good idea. The Hero Power also seems quite underpowered to me.
I wouldn't worry too much about the Frog token watermark honestly since basically everyone recognizes what it is.
Wailor
This card is really funny in terms of its art and effect and how it all connects together. I like it. I'm not sure about balance, but I quite enjoy the general direction it's going.
BloodMefist
Both are good cards, but I think Witty Witchdoctor is my favorite of the two because of how many different ways you can use it and I think it plays into the mechanics of the competition in a pretty nifty way.
Little update to the DH/Warrior Quest. I ended up noticing a pretty significant problem with the old design: Bulwark of Azzinoth (and thank you to BasilAnguis for first pointing this out). So the weapon has been changed to have 5 Durability, and returns to your hand upon death keeping the "indestructible" nature of the effect.
This is still quite strong with Bulwark, but it's no longer unbeatable. It can also now be soft-countered with weapon removal, but it won't get rid of the weapon permanently. One interesting interaction with this new version is that it now allows you to use Deathrattle effects from your other weapons too, which you couldn't use with the first version.
Demonxz95 - It's strange seeing Darius on a hunter card lol. Volcanic Forging seems a bit op as it's Mind Blast each turn at worst, and even more toxic immovable object at best (Bulwark of Azzinoth!!!). Legion Expedition seems ok balance wise but i'd suggest different art. The crystal alcoves i like cause it reminds me of Dragon Soul. This at least seems to be playable. One day my precious....
Well shit. I really should've thought of that, but I didn't. I'm absolutely going to need to think of some change to that.
If you put bold coding in the middle of the word, it should get rid of the bolding, so for example, if you write "Corr[b][/b]upter" instead of "Corrupter" into the textbox, then it'll display "Corrupter" on the text of the card without bolding "Corrupt".
I do feel like this new Quest is probably better designed, but I don't really see a practical reason to run the Quest and go through the objective over just running one of those Old Gods in your deck instead. I suppose for the time it's in Standard, it would give you a way to play them again.
Welcome everybody to my latest solo project, my new custom Hearthstone expansion, The Secrets of Volcania. This is a 135-card expansion that takes place on the islands of the Volcania. Volcania is a mysterious volcanic island filled with very unique wildlife, ancient crypts, and a lot of forgotten secrets to uncover. You partake on a journey to Volcania to discover exactly what lies on this volcanic island.
Along the way, you'll come across some things on the island that you won't be quite sure what they are. You're going to have to inspect a little bit further. Inspect is the new mechanic in the set, in which cards with Inspect can be dragged from your hand to your deck to put it on top of your deck and give it an upgrade. Think of it like a cross between Tradeable and Corrupt, though Inspecting doesn't cost any mana.
Let's look at Felspiked Tracker for example.
Felspiked Tracker can be played as simply a 3 mana 3/4 Demon with Taunt, but in its base form, you can also drag it from your hand to the top of your deck to give it the Inspect upgrade. When a card is Inspected, it cannot be Inspected again (with one exception), and its card text will change to say "Inspected" on it. Inspect upgrades are treated as part of the card and not an enchantment, meaning that extra stats will not be lost when Silenced, and the effect will not reset if the card is returned to your hand. Inspect cards have a red eye banner under the mana cost symbol which goes away when the card is Inspected.
Felspiked Tracker is also an example of where Elusive is now keyworded. Elusive is the effect found on cards like Faerie Dragon, now keyworded and all cards that use the effect will be retroactively changed to use Elusive.
Dual-class cards also make a return. There are 10 all-new pairings in the set, which each get a Legendary Quest. You have two different paths to take for each Quest, so the one you choose it up to you.
Demon Hunter
Archetypes: Taunt, Handbuff, Hero Attack.
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Demon Hunter/Warrior
Archetype: Taunt, Weapons.
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Warrior
Archetypes: Rush, Taunt, Weapons.
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Warrior/Hunter
Archetypes: Rush.
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Hunter
Archetypes: Rush, Secrets.
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Hunter/Rogue
Archetypes: Secrets.
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Rogue
Archetypes: Secrets, Cards that didn't start in your deck.
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Rogue/Priest
Archetypes: Cards that didn't start in your deck.
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Priest
Archetypes: Cards that didn't start in your deck, Casting multiple spells in a turn.
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Priest/Mage
Archetypes: Casting multiple spells in a turn.
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Mage
Archetypes: Casting multiple spells in a turn, Fire spells.
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Mage/Warlock
Archetypes: Fire spells.
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Warlock
Archetypes: Fire spells, Murlocs.
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"Destroy your opponent's board" isn't merely just destroying all their minions, but it destroys their entire side of the board as a gameplay mechanic. While your opponent's board is destroyed, their maximum board size effectively becomes 0 for the rest of the game. They cannot play minions from their hand, and effects that summon minions will fizzle and have no effect.
For the sake of Flame Invocator's effect, your "last spell's damage" is not the same thing as the total of amount of damage it dealt, but rather what it's damage value is. For example, the damage value of Arcane Shot and Consecration are both 2. Assuming no Spell Damage is used, both of these spells will result in the Invoked Drake being a 2/2 regardless of how much total damage either of the spells dealt.
Other Neutrals
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This is my first fully completed solo project in a really long time, and it was certainly fun making it and triumphant to finish it.
It tries to restore 5 Health to a character, but if it notices that it can't restore all 5 Health, then any excess becomes damage instead.
For example, suppose there's a Scrapyard Colossus on the board damaged at 2 Health. If you cast Shadowy Healing on, it'll restore 5 Health to it as normal.
If it's damaged at 5 Health instead though, it'll try to restore 5 Health to it but because it's only damaged by 2 Health, it'll only restore 2 Health and the remaining 3 Health becomes damage instead meaning that it'll restore 2 Health to and it and then deal 3 damage to it, leaving it at 4 Health. If the character in question is at full Health, it essentially becomes a flat deal 5 damage.
I've been very busy on my set, and it's actually just about done. I'm almost ready to post it. My Quest is actually part of my set, so less than stellar feedback is not exactly a good sign, but I will manage with it.
Linkblade91
I will admit that it is slightly awkward for both of our Paladin/Quests to have such similar themes, but I do quite like the flavor and mechanics of Looking For Group. I will however echo that Teamfight Tactics can definitely snowball quite heavily.
Control the Skies is a cool Quest. My main critiques of it though are that it doesn't seem to have much Druid flavor, and the effect is probably not that useful for Warrior since they already have tons of removal. Druid however would definitely appreciate it and I could see them trying to use it. At the end of the day, it's going to be basically impossible to make a Quest that doesn't skew at least slightly towards one Quest, so I can't really fault you for that.
BasilAnguis
Feed the Void has awesome flavor, but an aspect of it that I don't really like is how easy it is to complete it with very few cards. Not for balance reasons, but more so from a gameplay perspective. Quests are supposed to requirement some sort of commitment and I feel like this one doesn't really have that.
Scoundrel's Craftiness is okay. While I do like the Rogue/Hunter pairing with Secrets, it's definitely too obvious for the competition. One card submitted already uses this combination and also uses Secrets, and I can also guarantee that it won't be the last one either.
Free Me I unfortunately can't say that I like. It's unintentionally easy to circumvent. Just because you can't play weapons doesn't mean that you can't equip them with a card like Blingtron. The weapon actually doesn't even have to be part of the Quest. The Quest objective can just be Xal'atath's text. Finally the reward is also not that impressive. It's basically just a cheaper Alexstrasza without flexibility.
Wailor
I prefer Miracle of Shadows personally. I quite like the card. My only little gripe is that the objective feels more like a Sidequest than a fully-fledged Quest, but I think the balance is on point. Priest/Rogue is also one of my favorite pairings to use, so you get points for me there.
Keep the Balance is by no means bad, and I quite like the flavor. It's just simply a matter of preference here.
MrRhapsody
I do agree with changing the balance, but unfortunately, you've created a new problem. With the second version of the reward, your minions won't be able to attack your opponent at all for the rest of the game (assuming they don't have Charge) because they die at the start of your turn and don't gain Charge, thus they would die before they get their first opportunity to attack the enemy hero.
CursedParrot
I unfortunately don't really like this too much, mostly because I don't really think the reward is that interesting. Not necessarily unbalanced, but it doesn't feel creative enough to me.
Wailor (again)
I for one love the Paladin/Shaman Hero Power dynamic. Unfortunately, I don't really like basing the Quest around it just wants you to press it repeatedly which doesn't feel like something Quests want you to do. In my mind, Quests are something that wants you to use certain cards to accomplish.
Even if it is theoretically possible to complete Activate the Obelisk, Lost in the Park, Supreme Archaeology, or The Demon Seed using only your Hero Power, it still encourages you to use cards to complete it faster as relying solely on your Hero Power would be too slow and unreliable (and the less I speak about Untapped Potential, the better). I don't really feel that with this Quest. The balance of The Lich King himself feels okay (I don't know about perfect, but it's okay), although it is a little bit awkward given that The Lich King is already a thing in the game.
Hehe, I'm making a custom set where dual-class Quests are a pretty huge draw of the whole deal. I have 10 of them to work with (although I wouldn't be able to get away with all of them without set context). :)
EDIT: For clarification, minions that are buffed in the hand or deck would only count towards Quest progression once they're actually put onto the board. At least, that's the way I envision it.
When you play it, it will try to summon 20 Silver Hand Recruits. However, since you don't have that many board spaces, it will only summon up to as many empty board spaces you have. It will then remember how many Silver Hand Recruits it didn't summon, and whenever board space becomes available, it will summon them until you fill board again (or until it has summoned 20 total). Once it summons 20, the effect stops.
I can't exactly say I'm excited about submitting the original Superflow unchanged after the original wave of feedback I got, but the fact of the matter is that I absolutely couldn't get anything else that I thought was OK (other than that Paladin Secret), and I was also so incredibly occupied with my new custom set that it never even crossed my mind.
In the Yu-Gi-Oh video games, it doesn't need to survive, which is great because the card is already terrible.
If it did need to survive, that'd make its already impractically slow effect even worse since it would need to attack into something and then somehow not kill itself in the process, and then you'd have to go out of your way to protect a monster with 250 ATK for 5 turns straight.
Much simpler idea this time around. When one's death is not killed in honor, the light gives them a second chance.
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Anchorm4n
I like this new place you've taken the card. However, I do agree with Wailor about everything. If you can fix all this up, then you'd have yourself a pretty strong contender in my opinion.
Daybreaks
Welcome aboard. Hope you enjoy yourself. If you ever have any questions, then please feel absolutely free to ask.
My main two criticisms of the card are the fact that Paladins don't normally get large board clears like this, as well as fact that it doesn't feel like a VttSC card. Paladin does very occasionally get a small board clear here and there, but when it comes to large minions, their way of dealing them with is to lower their stats and then attack them rather than outright destroying them. As AeroJulwin said, do be sure to remember the Holy spell tag.
BasilAnguis
The first thing I notice is that the name is already taken by Dragon's Hoard, so you should change that when you can.
It's certainly interesting. I do think it can hurt you because if your opponent kills it on their turn (and then they would presumably also kill the Dragon if they do this), then you're guaranteed to burn a card. I don't really think there's a way to avoid that though. My first instinct is to say that balance is probably okay, but I can't really say for sure.
I've had some time taken up. Let's just say that I've been working on a project for a while, and I'll give you a little teaser in the spoiler below.
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More on that will be revealed later...
In response to my card's feedback, I must admit that I do like the Treant-summoning idea. I'll see if I can make it work on the card*. Here's my thoughts on everything so far:
Wailor
I do prefer Spectacular Explosion over Allari the Souleater, and I think the wording on it is fine. I do think Allari looks better in her Rare-Demon form too. Deranged Shot is neat, but unfortunately the rate in which you deal damage versus buff C'Thun is incredibly weak.
Linkblade91
I like it. I do think "Keywords" is something Hearthstone will use like this someday (if what I'm saying makes sense). I think this looks pretty good. I remember The Forest's Aid being pretty good, and this kinda looks like that, so it seems quite solid to me.
AeroJulwin
A really cool idea (though I must also agree about the wording), and I do think it needs better artwork.
Anchorm4n
I unfortunately must agree that your card is both overpowered and not particularly compelling, but I think it can absolutely be worked into something better.
*I'm now finding that the idea is extremely similar to Link's card. Both would be 8 mana Epic Druid spells that summon Treants based on an excess quantity of some other entity.
Further into the depths of the sunken city is the throne of the tides where Neptulon and Ozumat have a clash. Guarding the path inside are the Oceancrafters which are responsible for keeping the very state of the ocean as is, lest a Cataclysmic Opening were to occur.
Thanks for bringing this up again. Honestly I was a little disappointed when Season 5 started without any changes to the system. I do know how life gets in the ways of plans we have and while the card design competitions surely are a great way to entertain ourselves, there are far higher priorities. I hope everything worked out in the best possible way for Shadows!
- Finalist Voting or nah? We couldn't reach an agreement about the idea of abolishing the finalist voting. The point stands though that participation goes way down during the finalist voting, partly due to the fact that the finalists can not vote themselves.
- New rating system? The idea of a new rating system didn't find many supporters. It was meant to serve the purpose of avoiding too harsh ratings. If someone is forced to rate balance and flavor seperately for example, an OP but flavorful card might come out with a better rating than with the current system, where people might just go "OP! 1 star!". There were different ideas for the execution of this like adding categories to rate the cards in or extending the star system. Another interesting option that came up for the finalist voting asks the voters to put the submissions into their prefered order.
- Quality of life improvements The description boxes for each card should be visible in the finalist voting. It would help to see the cards on our voting pages and in the finalist voting ordered by how many stars we gave them in the first voting stage. Rewards (not only for the winners?) would be nice :)
We ended up finding that we like the idea of having the description boxes available during voting. As far as rewards go, Gold is definitely something to give out. The main problem is just the fact that we simply don't have very many things to buy with the currency yet, or else it would absolutely be a go.
We all came to the conclusion that a more advanced rating system also wouldn't really help much. In addition to requiring much more work on the voter's part (it may not sound like much, but it forces voters to think about their rating much more thoroughly). It would also look much more intimidating to newer competitors and would end up lowering the voter turnout.
We did also agree that the finalist phase is quite important. There are several times where the highest-scoring card from the initial voting phase doesn't win in the end, which means that the finalist voting is still very impactful. Another problem with removing the finalist phase is that it allows the possibility of trying to cheat the system by submitting your card shortly before the deadline where an extremely late submission could up with a really high score just simply because of the fact that barely anyone voted for them and they all voted for them relatively high.
I agree with all what anchorm4n said. Finalist voting feels bad and too low engagement, more rating options would be awesome and some 2nd place and 3rd place rewards could be good for attracting new people. I personally suggest we at least increase the Finalist stage from 1 day to 2, just to squeeze in a few more votes.
And i know it would be very hard to do, but i really wish for a big comp again. A custom class or custom expansion competition.
Extending the finalist voting a day could be feasible. The side-comps we've hosted in the past has proven that people don't have any problems with keeping track of 2 competitions at one time, and this is easier than that.
I'd be just as excited about a custom class or custom expansion competition as you are, but we would need to figure out a much better system to do that because the current one we have for regular competitions absolutely will not cut it. I do also question its viability as an event at the moment since our turnout for regular competitions is already quite low (which is something that we hope to find a way to remedy), and a competition on as large of a scale as this requires monumentally more effort and upkeep from the competitors.
Do you feel the water and the wind carrying you forward?
The effect will simply stop drawing cards once you reach your hand size limit, but will remember how many cards it still has left to draw, and when your hand has empty space, it will draw until you reach that amount.
In regards to your statement about hypothetical archetypes, that does definitely apply to me. I had thought about Taunt synergy for Demon Hunter just randomly somewhere, and in my set, The Secrets of Volcania, I decided to just go do it.
It's not immediately obvious, but I think the idea of Taunt synergy for Demon Hunter fits perfectly fine as they actually have quite a lot of Taunt cards. Despite the fact that Demon Hunter has been around for 2 years now (yes, it really has been that long, I know it sounds crazy), I don't think their class identity is completely defined yet and there's still a lot of places it can go. Deathrattles in DH were thought of as weird at first, but now they're just a perfectly normal part of the class identity. Taunt synergy could go the same way. If it encourages Demon Hunter to play in a different way that isn't just gaining Attack and hitting the face, then that sounds like a job well done to me.
Incidentally, dual-class Quests were also one of the biggest things of the new set and it happens to fit perfectly in theme with this week's CDC.
Wow, this does not have the participation I thought it would have. This isn't even a particularly complicated theme, so I'm not sure why.
In the case of Faceless Envoy, "[name of minion]" represents dynamic text that changes on the card itself as the game goes on, kinda like how Pathmaker works.
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Oh hey, I remember this. Unfortunately I'm not so sure that this counts, but if it does, then it'd be kinda cool.
I do want to point out a text inconsistency here though. Balgruf says "reunite with her" whereas Yara just says "reunite". It'd look better if you choose one of these two wording conventions and used it on both cards.
For the sake of safety, I think maybe raising the Cost to 7 is a good idea. The Hero Power also seems quite underpowered to me.
I wouldn't worry too much about the Frog token watermark honestly since basically everyone recognizes what it is.
Little update to the DH/Warrior Quest. I ended up noticing a pretty significant problem with the old design: Bulwark of Azzinoth (and thank you to BasilAnguis for first pointing this out). So the weapon has been changed to have 5 Durability, and returns to your hand upon death keeping the "indestructible" nature of the effect.
This is still quite strong with Bulwark, but it's no longer unbeatable. It can also now be soft-countered with weapon removal, but it won't get rid of the weapon permanently. One interesting interaction with this new version is that it now allows you to use Deathrattle effects from your other weapons too, which you couldn't use with the first version.
Well shit. I really should've thought of that, but I didn't. I'm absolutely going to need to think of some change to that.
I just posted my expansion (which you should totally check out by the way). I'm just going to say fuck it and throw three more of my Quests into the fray of this competition.
I do feel like this new Quest is probably better designed, but I don't really see a practical reason to run the Quest and go through the objective over just running one of those Old Gods in your deck instead. I suppose for the time it's in Standard, it would give you a way to play them again.
Welcome everybody to my latest solo project, my new custom Hearthstone expansion, The Secrets of Volcania. This is a 135-card expansion that takes place on the islands of the Volcania. Volcania is a mysterious volcanic island filled with very unique wildlife, ancient crypts, and a lot of forgotten secrets to uncover. You partake on a journey to Volcania to discover exactly what lies on this volcanic island.
Along the way, you'll come across some things on the island that you won't be quite sure what they are. You're going to have to inspect a little bit further. Inspect is the new mechanic in the set, in which cards with Inspect can be dragged from your hand to your deck to put it on top of your deck and give it an upgrade. Think of it like a cross between Tradeable and Corrupt, though Inspecting doesn't cost any mana.
Let's look at Felspiked Tracker for example.
Felspiked Tracker can be played as simply a 3 mana 3/4 Demon with Taunt, but in its base form, you can also drag it from your hand to the top of your deck to give it the Inspect upgrade. When a card is Inspected, it cannot be Inspected again (with one exception), and its card text will change to say "Inspected" on it. Inspect upgrades are treated as part of the card and not an enchantment, meaning that extra stats will not be lost when Silenced, and the effect will not reset if the card is returned to your hand. Inspect cards have a red eye banner under the mana cost symbol which goes away when the card is Inspected.
Felspiked Tracker is also an example of where Elusive is now keyworded. Elusive is the effect found on cards like Faerie Dragon, now keyworded and all cards that use the effect will be retroactively changed to use Elusive.
Dual-class cards also make a return. There are 10 all-new pairings in the set, which each get a Legendary Quest. You have two different paths to take for each Quest, so the one you choose it up to you.
Demon Hunter
Archetypes: Taunt, Handbuff, Hero Attack.
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Demon Hunter/Warrior
Archetype: Taunt, Weapons.
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Warrior
Archetypes: Rush, Taunt, Weapons.
Warrior/Hunter
Archetypes: Rush.
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Hunter
Archetypes: Rush, Secrets.
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Hunter/Rogue
Archetypes: Secrets.
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Rogue
Archetypes: Secrets, Cards that didn't start in your deck.
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Rogue/Priest
Archetypes: Cards that didn't start in your deck.
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Priest
Archetypes: Cards that didn't start in your deck, Casting multiple spells in a turn.
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Priest/Mage
Archetypes: Casting multiple spells in a turn.
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Mage
Archetypes: Casting multiple spells in a turn, Fire spells.
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Mage/Warlock
Archetypes: Fire spells.
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Warlock
Archetypes: Fire spells, Murlocs.
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Warlock/Shaman
Archetypes: Murlocs.
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Shaman
Archetypes: Murlocs/Minion summoning.
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Shaman/Paladin
Archetypes: Minion summoning.
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Paladin
Archetypes: Minion summoning, Minion enchanting.
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Paladin/Druid
Archetypes: Minion enchanting.
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Druid
Archetypes: Minion enchanting, Taunt, Hero Attack.
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Druid/Demon Hunter
Archetypes: Taunt, Hero Attack.
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Neutral Commons
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Other Neutrals
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This is my first fully completed solo project in a really long time, and it was certainly fun making it and triumphant to finish it.
It tries to restore 5 Health to a character, but if it notices that it can't restore all 5 Health, then any excess becomes damage instead.
For example, suppose there's a Scrapyard Colossus on the board damaged at 2 Health. If you cast Shadowy Healing on, it'll restore 5 Health to it as normal.
If it's damaged at 5 Health instead though, it'll try to restore 5 Health to it but because it's only damaged by 2 Health, it'll only restore 2 Health and the remaining 3 Health becomes damage instead meaning that it'll restore 2 Health to and it and then deal 3 damage to it, leaving it at 4 Health. If the character in question is at full Health, it essentially becomes a flat deal 5 damage.
I've been very busy on my set, and it's actually just about done. I'm almost ready to post it. My Quest is actually part of my set, so less than stellar feedback is not exactly a good sign, but I will manage with it.
I will admit that it is slightly awkward for both of our Paladin/Quests to have such similar themes, but I do quite like the flavor and mechanics of Looking For Group. I will however echo that Teamfight Tactics can definitely snowball quite heavily.
Control the Skies is a cool Quest. My main critiques of it though are that it doesn't seem to have much Druid flavor, and the effect is probably not that useful for Warrior since they already have tons of removal. Druid however would definitely appreciate it and I could see them trying to use it. At the end of the day, it's going to be basically impossible to make a Quest that doesn't skew at least slightly towards one Quest, so I can't really fault you for that.
Feed the Void has awesome flavor, but an aspect of it that I don't really like is how easy it is to complete it with very few cards. Not for balance reasons, but more so from a gameplay perspective. Quests are supposed to requirement some sort of commitment and I feel like this one doesn't really have that.
Scoundrel's Craftiness is okay. While I do like the Rogue/Hunter pairing with Secrets, it's definitely too obvious for the competition. One card submitted already uses this combination and also uses Secrets, and I can also guarantee that it won't be the last one either.
Free Me I unfortunately can't say that I like. It's unintentionally easy to circumvent. Just because you can't play weapons doesn't mean that you can't equip them with a card like Blingtron. The weapon actually doesn't even have to be part of the Quest. The Quest objective can just be Xal'atath's text. Finally the reward is also not that impressive. It's basically just a cheaper Alexstrasza without flexibility.
I prefer Miracle of Shadows personally. I quite like the card. My only little gripe is that the objective feels more like a Sidequest than a fully-fledged Quest, but I think the balance is on point. Priest/Rogue is also one of my favorite pairings to use, so you get points for me there.
Keep the Balance is by no means bad, and I quite like the flavor. It's just simply a matter of preference here.
I for one love the Paladin/Shaman Hero Power dynamic. Unfortunately, I don't really like basing the Quest around it just wants you to press it repeatedly which doesn't feel like something Quests want you to do. In my mind, Quests are something that wants you to use certain cards to accomplish.
Even if it is theoretically possible to complete Activate the Obelisk, Lost in the Park, Supreme Archaeology, or The Demon Seed using only your Hero Power, it still encourages you to use cards to complete it faster as relying solely on your Hero Power would be too slow and unreliable (and the less I speak about Untapped Potential, the better). I don't really feel that with this Quest. The balance of The Lich King himself feels okay (I don't know about perfect, but it's okay), although it is a little bit awkward given that The Lich King is already a thing in the game.
According to TheFriendlyEnemy, it does indeed make your hero Jaina with her Hero Power, and it does also change your class the way Maestra does.
Hehe, I'm making a custom set where dual-class Quests are a pretty huge draw of the whole deal. I have 10 of them to work with (although I wouldn't be able to get away with all of them without set context). :)
EDIT: For clarification, minions that are buffed in the hand or deck would only count towards Quest progression once they're actually put onto the board. At least, that's the way I envision it.
When you play it, it will try to summon 20 Silver Hand Recruits. However, since you don't have that many board spaces, it will only summon up to as many empty board spaces you have. It will then remember how many Silver Hand Recruits it didn't summon, and whenever board space becomes available, it will summon them until you fill board again (or until it has summoned 20 total). Once it summons 20, the effect stops.
Huh. I thought for sure that I linked the banners to the right pages, but apparently I didn't.
Fixed. *thumbs up*
I can't exactly say I'm excited about submitting the original Superflow unchanged after the original wave of feedback I got, but the fact of the matter is that I absolutely couldn't get anything else that I thought was OK (other than that Paladin Secret), and I was also so incredibly occupied with my new custom set that it never even crossed my mind.
In the Yu-Gi-Oh video games, it doesn't need to survive, which is great because the card is already terrible.
If it did need to survive, that'd make its already impractically slow effect even worse since it would need to attack into something and then somehow not kill itself in the process, and then you'd have to go out of your way to protect a monster with 250 ATK for 5 turns straight.
Much simpler idea this time around. When one's death is not killed in honor, the light gives them a second chance.
More feedback:
My main two criticisms of the card are the fact that Paladins don't normally get large board clears like this, as well as fact that it doesn't feel like a VttSC card. Paladin does very occasionally get a small board clear here and there, but when it comes to large minions, their way of dealing them with is to lower their stats and then attack them rather than outright destroying them. As AeroJulwin said, do be sure to remember the Holy spell tag.
The first thing I notice is that the name is already taken by Dragon's Hoard, so you should change that when you can.
It's certainly interesting. I do think it can hurt you because if your opponent kills it on their turn (and then they would presumably also kill the Dragon if they do this), then you're guaranteed to burn a card. I don't really think there's a way to avoid that though. My first instinct is to say that balance is probably okay, but I can't really say for sure.
I've had some time taken up. Let's just say that I've been working on a project for a while, and I'll give you a little teaser in the spoiler below.
More on that will be revealed later...
In response to my card's feedback, I must admit that I do like the Treant-summoning idea. I'll see if I can make it work on the card*. Here's my thoughts on everything so far:
*I'm now finding that the idea is extremely similar to Link's card. Both would be 8 mana Epic Druid spells that summon Treants based on an excess quantity of some other entity.
Here comes the mini-set!
Throne of the Tides
Further into the depths of the sunken city is the throne of the tides where Neptulon and Ozumat have a clash. Guarding the path inside are the Oceancrafters which are responsible for keeping the very state of the ocean as is, lest a Cataclysmic Opening were to occur.
I must apologize, as I did not mean for it to take this long to get back to the two of you.
We ended up finding that we like the idea of having the description boxes available during voting. As far as rewards go, Gold is definitely something to give out. The main problem is just the fact that we simply don't have very many things to buy with the currency yet, or else it would absolutely be a go.
We all came to the conclusion that a more advanced rating system also wouldn't really help much. In addition to requiring much more work on the voter's part (it may not sound like much, but it forces voters to think about their rating much more thoroughly). It would also look much more intimidating to newer competitors and would end up lowering the voter turnout.
We did also agree that the finalist phase is quite important. There are several times where the highest-scoring card from the initial voting phase doesn't win in the end, which means that the finalist voting is still very impactful. Another problem with removing the finalist phase is that it allows the possibility of trying to cheat the system by submitting your card shortly before the deadline where an extremely late submission could up with a really high score just simply because of the fact that barely anyone voted for them and they all voted for them relatively high.
Extending the finalist voting a day could be feasible. The side-comps we've hosted in the past has proven that people don't have any problems with keeping track of 2 competitions at one time, and this is easier than that.
I'd be just as excited about a custom class or custom expansion competition as you are, but we would need to figure out a much better system to do that because the current one we have for regular competitions absolutely will not cut it. I do also question its viability as an event at the moment since our turnout for regular competitions is already quite low (which is something that we hope to find a way to remedy), and a competition on as large of a scale as this requires monumentally more effort and upkeep from the competitors.
Do you feel the water and the wind carrying you forward?
The effect will simply stop drawing cards once you reach your hand size limit, but will remember how many cards it still has left to draw, and when your hand has empty space, it will draw until you reach that amount.
Hey, you know what goes pretty well with that new 9-mana Paladin spell? *wink, wink*