Interesting, I've almost suggested to make it a legendary. I had the same problem with your card that you and linkblade had with mine: the first impression was scary, but the more you think about it, the more reasonable it gets. So my advice would be to keep it at 4 and an epic. The effect might be at the brink of legendary worthiness (Dragonbane feels a bit stronger), but the art definitely isn't for me.
Also thanks for your feedback, I will definitely submit the feminist version, giving her a unique touch!
Yeah but she seems like a type to invite her sister for an adventure anyway... I mean she trained murloc to speak common, demon hunters also train murlocs... see lots in common...
I am intrigued about Elise of the Wasteland and her text "Has some serious questions about her sister's recent activities." - maybe they will develop the 2 sisters relationship and adventures in Outland in the 2nd expansion this year.... (one can dream, right?)
Board with nail in it... Brings back memories... My friends invited me over, started diablo, went to level 2... equiped board with nail in it and gave me the controls to try and defeat butcher... was a bit mean, but great fun...
This looks incredibly strong at first glance. I mean, AOE is supposed to be a weakness of Hunter if I remember correctly… but then, 2 damage to all enemies on 6 isn't THAT bad. It might scare people though, so you should make sure to write a good explanation.
Yeah, AOE and Hunter is always a touchy subject. But as a Hunter main, it's something I always want more of. I know it's a weakness of the class, but that doesn't mean they should have 0 AOE. I aimed for 6 mana for this because of Deathstalker Rexxar, but I'm thinking bumping this up to 5 mana would be better. I'm also thinking possibly switching it to a Legendary, so the access to the effect is limited just like Deathstalker Rexxar's.
Edit: Side subject, no idea why anchorm4n's quoted text isn't showing on my comment. It's visible when I edit my comment, but it shows up blank on the forum. Anyone aware of an issue with quoted text not appearing?
I must say I'm a little disappointed there's no cake eating mouse for 3 mana with 1 attack and 4 health yet.
As promised, more feedback.
BloodMefist
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I agree with the other guys who said that the Hunter card is the best. It's flavorful and small beasts always come in handy in Hunter.
KANSAS
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I like your newest version and your reasoning about the balance is perfectly fine. Well done!
Cg8889
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The Hunter card surely is the most interesting. The effect is quite creative without being completely crazy. You could try to find better art for the weapon and I was wondering if the token shouldn't be a legendary as well (like Lich King and Tirion's).
bananenparty
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I'd drop the Murloc, there's no reason why this should be tagged a Pirate. The Trogg is okay but probably too expensive.
Fedrion
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The others already pointed out the wording issues. I also don't feel the flavor, Divine Shield and Pirates don't mix well in my eyes.
Nirast
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Nice pun! I prefer the second version. I'm not sure about Pirates or Vampires being a thing in KotfT… maybe give it a custom watermark?
mantiax
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I like the art, but two tribe effects are boring.
Xarkkal
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This looks incredibly strong at first glance. I mean, AOE is supposed to be a weakness of Hunter if I remember correctly… but then, 2 damage to all enemies on 6 isn't THAT bad. It might scare people though, so you should make sure to write a good explanation.
Sorry everyone, this week has been a little crazy again. I haven't had any time to give any feedback. I'll get some feedback for those that have not submitted at the end of this comment.
Thanks for all the feedback on my first idea. In my typical fashion, my first idea has been abandoned and replaced with a new one. Any feedback is always appreciated! :)
Feedback:
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@anchorm4n - I sat here staring at your card going back and forth on any negative feedback. Then I scrolled down and saw linkblade did the same thing as me. I have nothing bad to say about it at all, I don't know why it raises so many red flags that resolve themselves when you think about it long enough. Also, side note: I was looking at the wording of "also damages minions next to whomever this attacks", and this is one of the most consistently inconsistent wordings in the game. Blizzard has used "this" (Cave Hydra), "it" (Foe Reaper 4000) and "he" (Magnataur Alpha). Maybe make yours say "she"? #Feminism #LadiesCanDamageAdjacentMinionsToo
@bananenparty - First, with Fishy Freebooter I have to say hard no to the Murloc/Pirate tag. We have no dual tags in Hearthstone other than "All". So the Murloc/Pirate is a no go. I like trying to synergize Murlocs and Pirates, but I think there are more interesting ways to do so than simply giving +1/+1. With Booty Trogg (haha, I'm thinking about Trogg Booty now), I like the idea more. Make sure you capitalize "Mana Crystal". I do agree that it feels overcosted at 5 mana. Maybe a 4/2/4?
@Fedrion - My personal feelings about the Proudmoore family aside, (For teh Horde!). Not sure how to fix the wording, everything I can come up with I think will end up being too much text. Sorry I'm not more help, I like the flavor though.
@Nirast - Yeah the first one should be epic. Also, unsure about using "keywords", maybe "text" instead?
@mantiax - I see this got submitted before I got to posting the feedback. I highly suggest waiting for feedback before jumping on submission. Having other sets of eyes look over for mistakes is extremely valuable. Unfortunately, "Pirates" should be capitalized and you left off the period at the end of the text. Other than those small issues, I have nothing negative to say.
Achievements that reward no points are "Feats of Strength" and are tied to limited availability. Them displaying on your profile if they are unearned is an error and will be correct at some point down the line when the page gets an overhaul.
I don't think it's very fair to give them a point count when they are only obtainable in a small window. While I do believe that people on the site who have been here longer should have a better chance of having a higher total count, at some point, there would be too much of a discrepancy between a newer user and older user in how many total points were available.
I agree with Demonxz95. Southsea Bladedancer is probably your best card, but you need to change the art. I also might increase the cost to 3 mana. 2 mana to hit three things for 2 damage is really good, especially when they aren't random targets like with Cleave or other similar cards. Also if she had more health you could set up some interesting trades running her into smaller minions and then killing the ones with higher attack through the ability, but with 1 Health she will die no matter what she hits. *edit* I really like the 6 mana 5/2 statline and the art is pretty good. All around nice card.
Thank you! But it actually is a 6 mana 6/2 right now and since the statline is my last issue with her do you think I should drop the attack to 5? Are there any meta cards at 6 health that ask for removal at the moment?
I saw your card and accidentally thought it was a 5/2. 6/2 statline is fine, though I don't think the 1 attack will matter a whole lot.
We actually already have something like that. This was written up before I joined the team, so it's not in my typical style, but it can still give some good information to tide you over until I get around to covering a related topic. https://outof.cards/guides/162-hearthstone-hero-lore
The only thing I'm quite sure I got right is "approximately Pi" - that should be 3 = three = tree. "gore" would have been fitting for the "lots of blood" part...
Uncharrrted Waters - Card Design Competition Discussion Thread
Interesting, I've almost suggested to make it a legendary. I had the same problem with your card that you and linkblade had with mine: the first impression was scary, but the more you think about it, the more reasonable it gets. So my advice would be to keep it at 4 and an epic. The effect might be at the brink of legendary worthiness (Dragonbane feels a bit stronger), but the art definitely isn't for me.
Also thanks for your feedback, I will definitely submit the feminist version, giving her a unique touch!
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
This is fun. The windfury weapon with inner demon on 8 for 22 damage: tres magnifique.
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
Yeah but she seems like a type to invite her sister for an adventure anyway... I mean she trained murloc to speak common, demon hunters also train murlocs... see lots in common...
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
I am intrigued about Elise of the Wasteland and her text "Has some serious questions about her sister's recent activities." - maybe they will develop the 2 sisters relationship and adventures in Outland in the 2nd expansion this year.... (one can dream, right?)
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
There are so many bad demons...
P.S. Saying that after having tried the weapon and getting bunch of garbage =(
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
Board with nail in it... Brings back memories... My friends invited me over, started diablo, went to level 2... equiped board with nail in it and gave me the controls to try and defeat butcher... was a bit mean, but great fun...
Uncharrrted Waters - Card Design Competition Discussion Thread
Yeah, AOE and Hunter is always a touchy subject. But as a Hunter main, it's something I always want more of. I know it's a weakness of the class, but that doesn't mean they should have 0 AOE. I aimed for 6 mana for this because of Deathstalker Rexxar, but I'm thinking bumping this up to 5 mana would be better. I'm also thinking possibly switching it to a Legendary, so the access to the effect is limited just like Deathstalker Rexxar's.
Edit: Side subject, no idea why anchorm4n's quoted text isn't showing on my comment. It's visible when I edit my comment, but it shows up blank on the forum. Anyone aware of an issue with quoted text not appearing?
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
Snake on a Stick? Hmmm... Piranha Launcher
Uncharrrted Waters - Card Design Competition Discussion Thread
I must say I'm a little disappointed there's no cake eating mouse for 3 mana with 1 attack and 4 health yet.
As promised, more feedback.
BloodMefist
KANSAS
Cg8889
bananenparty
Fedrion
Nirast
mantiax
Xarkkal
This Week's Tavern Brawl is "Rumbledome" and Features Dual-Class Heroes & Unique Weapons
Looks really cool, looking forward to use Felfire Flamberge
Uncharrrted Waters - Card Design Competition Discussion Thread
Sorry everyone, this week has been a little crazy again. I haven't had any time to give any feedback. I'll get some feedback for those that have not submitted at the end of this comment.
Thanks for all the feedback on my first idea. In my typical fashion, my first idea has been abandoned and replaced with a new one. Any feedback is always appreciated! :)
Feedback:
From page 3 & 4:
@anchorm4n - I sat here staring at your card going back and forth on any negative feedback. Then I scrolled down and saw linkblade did the same thing as me. I have nothing bad to say about it at all, I don't know why it raises so many red flags that resolve themselves when you think about it long enough. Also, side note: I was looking at the wording of "also damages minions next to whomever this attacks", and this is one of the most consistently inconsistent wordings in the game. Blizzard has used "this" (Cave Hydra), "it" (Foe Reaper 4000) and "he" (Magnataur Alpha). Maybe make yours say "she"? #Feminism #LadiesCanDamageAdjacentMinionsToo
@bananenparty - First, with Fishy Freebooter I have to say hard no to the Murloc/Pirate tag. We have no dual tags in Hearthstone other than "All". So the Murloc/Pirate is a no go. I like trying to synergize Murlocs and Pirates, but I think there are more interesting ways to do so than simply giving +1/+1. With Booty Trogg (haha, I'm thinking about Trogg Booty now), I like the idea more. Make sure you capitalize "Mana Crystal". I do agree that it feels overcosted at 5 mana. Maybe a 4/2/4?
@Fedrion - My personal feelings about the Proudmoore family aside, (For teh Horde!). Not sure how to fix the wording, everything I can come up with I think will end up being too much text. Sorry I'm not more help, I like the flavor though.
@Nirast - Yeah the first one should be epic. Also, unsure about using "keywords", maybe "text" instead?
@mantiax - I see this got submitted before I got to posting the feedback. I highly suggest waiting for feedback before jumping on submission. Having other sets of eyes look over for mistakes is extremely valuable. Unfortunately, "Pirates" should be capitalized and you left off the period at the end of the text. Other than those small issues, I have nothing negative to say.
Uncharrrted Waters - Card Design Competition Discussion Thread
[Game] Card Treasure Hunt (The Resurrection Attempt)
Fantastic, you got it! The Latin word for 'that' in the feminine gender is illa, hence the clue :)
Over to you!
Rise Up!
I really like the food-related card backs. This one isn't QUITE as cool as "Pie", but I'm happy to have it.
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Achievements that reward no points are "Feats of Strength" and are tied to limited availability. Them displaying on your profile if they are unearned is an error and will be correct at some point down the line when the page gets an overhaul.
I don't think it's very fair to give them a point count when they are only obtainable in a small window. While I do believe that people on the site who have been here longer should have a better chance of having a higher total count, at some point, there would be too much of a discrepancy between a newer user and older user in how many total points were available.
Uncharrrted Waters - Card Design Competition Discussion Thread
I saw your card and accidentally thought it was a 5/2. 6/2 statline is fine, though I don't think the 1 attack will matter a whole lot.
11x Bonus Stars
I got the 11x bonus finishing at about 1650 on NA servers. Overall win rate of 71% for the season (183-130)
Kael'thas and the Blood Elves - Traversing Azeroth
We actually already have something like that. This was written up before I joined the team, so it's not in my typical style, but it can still give some good information to tide you over until I get around to covering a related topic. https://outof.cards/guides/162-hearthstone-hero-lore
[Game] Card Treasure Hunt (The Resurrection Attempt)
Gorillabot A-3!
lot's of blood = gore
*don't speak Latin*
machine = bot
apple's initial = A
approximately pi = 3
Nice one :-)
[Game] Card Treasure Hunt (The Resurrection Attempt)
Not the card I'm thinking of; however, your thoughts on 'approximately Pi' and 'lots of blood' are both correct.
[Game] Card Treasure Hunt (The Resurrection Attempt)
Twig of the World Tree?
The only thing I'm quite sure I got right is "approximately Pi" - that should be 3 = three = tree. "gore" would have been fitting for the "lots of blood" part...
Is Ledros control still worth playing?
Yeah that was my sentiment as well honestly, I found it pretty hard to believe that this list was anything better than bottom of tier 3.
[Game] Card Treasure Hunt (The Resurrection Attempt)
Nope, although I see some of the clues in this guess :) You're on the right track
Taking a Look at the Evolution of Hearthstone's Pirate Warrior Through the Years
Until Quest Warrior came about, Pirate Warrior was the only way I was going to get my golden hero. It is a staple in my repertoire
Card Design Conversation - Medley of Mechanics
These are awesome ideas! Keep it up.