linkblade91 - Plague Doctor has really nice flavor and seems prefectly balanced. The only way to improve it would probably be to put it into the same expansion as Xaril… Dual Wielding is weird, because yes you're holding two weapons in your hand, but no you're not actually dual wielding them. Balance-wise it should be fine… exceptc an you imagine drawing a buffed Kingsbane with this?

MenacingBagel - Mr. Chu seems fine balance wise…but yeah it's just a generic Bomb Warrior card. Otto the Flipper makes absolutely no sense to me. Do you mind posting an existing card or Mr. Chu being affected by this?

Demonxz95 - Felfire Fury: 'Choose a minion. Deal 2 damage to all others/all other minions.' Soul Enchantress: 'Your cards that give Attack or Health also give +1/+1.' Soul Enchantress has the additional problem that there are cards that give buffs to your hero and it's unclear how it interacts with those.

grumpymonk - Bestow Faith wording is weird. 'If it's a minion…' makes no sense because there is no 'it' you could possibly refer to. Also 'Health' is capitalized. My suggestion would be to make it always target a minion: 'Restore 12 Health to a minion, and any excess healing to your hero.' If you want to only heal your hero you can still target any minion that is at full Health. I had the same exact idea as Keeper Remulos and found that it could be a lot cheaper. My card was 3 mana 1/4 which makes 3x1x4=12; In the first sentence you can say 'Mana' without 'Crystals'. That way the line breaks exactly where the new sentence begins.

Pokeniner - Does it deal excess damage to all other enemy minions or randomly split between them or to one random enemy minion? Depending on the answer this is balanced or not… Also the wording probably should make that clear.

CursedParrot - Forced Summoning feels super weird, simply because it refers to a non-existent spell by name. Disciple of Krag'wa probably should be a little bit weaker to punish it for its flexibility. Kirin Tor Arcanist is my favorite out of the three but could be bit cheaper, since you have to spend extra mana on the spell in order to get the effect.

DestroyerR - Exceptionally unexpected, yet inexecutable.

Valor1204 - The effect is nice, but really has nothing to do with Imps OR Implosions. Balance-wise this might be too expensive at 4 Mana. Unless I'm misreading this it continually swaps sides whenever it kills a minion until 8 damage is done? 2-3 Mana should be fine. Also that art makes my eyes bleed…

BloodMefist - My favorite out of the three is Corpse Explosion. I think it is too specific though. If you remove the Deathrattle requirement the card text could be a LOT shorter as well. 'Deal 2 damage to all minions. If any die add a 'Corspe Explosion' to your hand.' To make up for the easier to fulfill condtiotn you could increase Mana Cost to 4. However I think your version is balanced the way it is and very flavorful! Btw Shadow Seer would be disqualified for using the word 'next'.

Thehoax91: I think Aldor artifactor is a bit too cheap for generating two cards of your choice maybe just one or two mana more? And personally I don't really like the weapon since mage never had anything like it but it would be neat to see in-game.

anchorm4n: This means that you can swap their placements around right? I get why you used it but the wording seems off.

DestroyerR I feel like this is too strong in a vacuum but I'm not sure how it would work in-game. Rouge could pull it off really easily by shadow stepping some echoing ooze but outside of them, I'm not sure how well it would fair.

BloodMefist: I really like shadow seer, since it's generally simple and a clean card fitting with priest's identity/spoiler]

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KANSAS - Up to three Coins for Rogue sounds like bad things are about to happen. I'd either make it one coin altogether if it deals excess damage or at least make it only able to target enemy minions, otherwise the abundance of Lackeys seems like a balance issue to me. But I do tend to judge combo-able cards by the worst case scenario, so you might want to wait for more feedback.

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KANSAS:

It's a cool idea but I don't understand why the Goblin would get more money if he took out more teeth than he was supposed to so the flavor is a little bit off imo.

Linkblade: I like both, but i like Dual Wielding a little more. It might not have lots of good weapons to synergize, but the flavour compensates this small flaw for me.

MenacingBagel: i like Mr. Chu the most, but for me it would be just fine if it shuffled the usual 5 damage bomb instead. Yes, it would make it less flavourful and unique, but also more realistic and synergistic with the other Bomb cards.

Demonxz: Loved Felfire Fury. Flavourful, balanced, versastile and cool loocking. The same can't be said about Soul Enchantress, looks way too much "Fan Made" to me.

Grumpymonk: I think i prefer Keeper Remulos, for i can't see Bestow Faith secondary effect being useful in most situations. Restoring minions health is more useful in tempo/ mid-range decks, and i think it is too slow for those. The only decks that would like to use it is Control/ Combo Paladin, wich would use it only to restore the hero's health most of the time.

Pokeniner: Let me see if i got it right: If it attacks, for example, a 1 health minion, it would deal 3 damage to all other enemy minions. Is that right? If so, it should indeed cost 4, or maybe even 5 but with a targetable battlecry. If not, then think it's fine as it is.

CursedParot: Disciple of Krag'wa is the best, but if i was you, i would totally change the flavour, switching its class,name and art. The others are kinda confusing and overdone.

Destroyer: Just No, sorry. Way too memey.

Valor1204: Does it work like a "Ping-Pong" effect? Hit enemy,hit friendly, hit enemy and so on? If so, i think the first hit should be targetable to any minion. It would still be balanced and also less wordy.

BloodMefist: Loved Corpse Explosion, in my opinion there's a high chance it'll make to the finals. Shadow Seer doesn't fit the theme as you noticed and Doomguard Devastator is too similar to my card and i don't want competition >:( …just kidding, it's all right.

Anchorm4n: Looks okay, but as little sence it makes, i think it should make the enemy minions flexible for you too (under YOUR control), for the class that would most likelly use a vanilla stated Beast is Hunter, and they are one of the classes that have the most cards that interaction with enemy minions position, with cards like Explosive Shot, Powershot, Crushing Walls, etc.

TheHoax91: Liked both, but i would like Felo'Melorn even more if it was a 5/2, 4/3, 4/2 or something. It would make it more flexible, interesting and useful instead of just a "Malygos Button" that you press once you have a shit load of damaging spells.

KANSAS: Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaybe 5 mana would be more fair, or less stats. But in general, it's near perfect.

Meisterz39: Trample LOL. But seriously, i think this is way over costed, specially considering it is a legendary. It should've cost 4 in my opinion.

Cg8889: Cool, but i don't think the Highlander requeriment is necessary, the powerlevel is in the same levels of the original Sir Finley and Justicar Trueheart. I suggest removing the Highlander requerement OR keep the requirement and make it a Start of Game effect, making it more like Baku the Mooneater and [Hearthstone Card (Genn Graymane) Not Found].

Linkblade91: Big fan of Plague Doctor.  The flavor is there and I loved the Toxins from Xaril back in the day.  Dual Wielding isn't as interesting and suffers from something a lot of other designs do in this contest, which is a forced 'x'.  The wording could just as easily be 'Add a copy to your hand' which takes up less card space, but the word 'extra' is forced in for the sake of the contest.

MenacingBagel: Mr. Chu is alright, but also weirdly doesn't synergize a ton with Bomb Warrior, since the Improvised Explosives don't actually count as Bombs (or at least I think they don't) for the sake of Blastmaster Boom.  Otto is a cute effect, but what would reversing the text functionally do?  If there is no actual gameplay effect, then it would only serve to make cards harder to understand for people who have not seen them yet.

Demonxz95: While I like Felfire Fury, it also suffers from forced 'x' since wording the effect as 'Deal 2 to all other minions' is less wordy and more consistent with existing cards.  Soul Enchantress almost suffers from the forced 'x', but the 'extra' does help clarify that the affected cards must be buffing stats.  I also like soul Enchantress because it make some cards like Power Word Shield considerations in deck building.

grumpymonk: I think Bestow Faith should specify restore health to a minion, otherwise it slightly devalues the excess mechanic.  Keeper Remulous is an interesting effect, but I'm afraid 12 mana might be too much for pushing combo potential.  I think Remluous should be 11 max mana.  Otherwise, both are very solid cards that I have a hard time favoring.  Remulous is a novel mechanic, but my bias for Control Paladin pushes me towards Bestow Faith.

Pokeniner: A fine design, although making a Neutral Shadowbolt is a tad scary.  This is mostly offest by the fact that the target is random, making it substantially worse as the game goes on.  It is exceptionally strong at controlling and early game board, but also doesn't create tempo by leaving a body, and has interesting implications with hand-buffs.  I've talked myself into liking this card more, I don't think it needs to be 4 mana. 

CursedParrot: Not a fan of Forced Summoning, it's too easy to lock your opponent out of a turn and the Golem spell doesn't make sense as it is written.  I like Disciple of Krag'wa a lot, but feel the flavor is slightly off and the effect is too strong as is.  Krag'wa and his spirit were about casting lots of spells, which his Disciple does not follow.  You could either re-tool it to be more about spellcasting, or remove reference to Krag'wa.  Effect-wise, I think it would be better to have a slightly higher statline and make it restore health instead of gaining health.  This removes pop-off potential when killing low-stat minions, but still makes it a threat that can stick to the board.  Big fan of Kirin Tor Arcanist since it creates decision making when casting spells.  I think it should be reworded to 'After' instead of 'Whenever' since excess damage would be calculated after the spell resolves, not at the time of casting.

DestroyerR: Cute, but I'm pretty sure that's not gonna fly in this contest.

Valor1204: Doesn't have anything to do with imps.  The effect is wordy, so it might be better to stop at one enemy minion.  If you wanna push the bounce idea, go for it, but definitely change the flavor to something more bouncy and less imp-y.

anchorm4n: A niche effect, but an interesting one.  I dig it.  We also know that the devs have the technology to pull this off since it gets done in Battlegrounds.   

TheHoax91: Aldor Artificer also suffers from forced 'x' since 'add a copy of it' would get the idea across the same.  Also worried about too much value generation in one card, since a Discovered mage spell is often quite good. lol, when I was making my own cards for this, your Felo'melorn came up in Hearthcards 3 different times.  The effect is interesting, but has dangerous potential.  Within that potential however, is also a lot of counterplay.  The turn you play it you basically spend 7 mana to 'do nothing', assuming you're holding onto it for a combo next turn.  I like the design, but worry that high spell damage will set off alarms for many people when they look at it.

MrRhapsody: Left name, right artwork.  I like the effect because it limits what you can hit with it.  That said, the excess damage mechanic opens up so much interesting decisions in play-making that this card circumvents.  You always want to play it on high health targets and never on low health ones, making the design a bit one-dimensional and really strong since it basically makes a tempo removal against many 3-4 drops.

Kansas: Really like the effect, payoffs for excess damage make for interesting play decisions.  However, I am not sold on the flavor.  Even after your explanation, it still seems strange for a dentist to be collecting extra money for essentially killing their clients.  If the card were something like a hired killer, or an executing showman (along the lines of Draven), or even a thug, it would make more sense flavor-wise.

meisterz39: An interesting design for sure, if not a bit scary given how large Warrior minions and weapons can get.  Cards like Sul'thraze and Warrior's many Rush minions become immense threats that could offer little counterplay.

Cg8889: Interesting, but also not powerful enough to justify the Highlander requirement.  I am also a bit concerned with how it would interact with UI, especially on mobile where the game is already tight for space.

@Demonxy95

I really like Felfire Fury, it seems very powerful and balanced when compared to something like "Breath of the Infinite." If you wanted to bring its powerlevel down a bit, you could make it 3 Mana "Deal 1 damage to a minion and 2 damage to all minions except it"

@MrRaphsody

I liked your card, but I think that it would work better (and be more flavorful) if the excess damage was dealt to your hero instead of itself. You would of course also have to bring the stats down a little to compensate, which would also make it less overpowered in it's ideal case of hitting a 4+ Health minion.

@KANSAS

I think it would be better if the Goblin dealt 3 damage and had 3 Health. That way it would be more balanced compared to something like Fire Plume Phoenix and it would produce fewer coins.

@meisterz39

I like the idea of your card, but I think it might be a bit overcosted. To balance it, consider how much excess damage you usually do in a round and base the cost off of how much dealing that much damage to the enemy Hero would be worth. From my estimations, I think you'd need to deal around 10-12 excess damage for it to be worth 6 Mana, which doesn't seem like it's the average amount of excess damage usually dealt. You might want to either reduce the cost or attach it to a minion as a Battlecry or passive effect. Also, it shouldn't be in the classic set, since it is a Legendary Spell. 

@Cg8889

I like your card, but I think that in order to make the effect clear, you might want to include an image that shows how the effect would function in terms of UI. For example:

@MenacingBagel, I like Mr Chu. It feels like a very fair card. It is just interactive enough to be a much more attractive card than something like Wrenchcalibur which just shuffles bombs and that it is. It has the ability to punish your opponent hard, but they also have time to deal with it before it shuffles too much damage.

@Demonxz95, I don't like Felfire Fury because the X feels a bit forced. Normally a card like would read "Choose a minion, deal 2 damage to all other minions". That being said Soul Enchantress isn't bad. Though I don't think you need the word "enchantments" in there.

@grumpymonk, I like Keeper Remulos better, but I am not sure if it is safe to go all the way to 12 mana crystals. I think you could reduce it to 11 to make it a bit less scary and it would still be a very powerful and interesting card.

@Pokeniner, This is an interesting card. One thing that kind of bugs me about it is that it is a 1 health minion that automatically dies as soon as you play it which makes it feel a lot like a spell. This may not be an issue for a lot of people, but if you wanted you could change it to Rush instead of attacking a random enemy minion. Also, you may want to clarify exactly how the excess damage is dealt. Is it distributed randomly, or do all enemy minions take an amount of damage equal to the excess? One last note, 3 mana 4 attack is pretty good as a neutral card. I would either stick it in a class or bump it up to 4 mana.

@CursedParrot, I really liked Forced Summoning, it is really unique. I think if you just fixed up the wording then it would be great. For one you don't need to say "and has excess mana" because if they didn't have any excess mana it wouldn't trigger just like how Snake Trap won't trigger unless you have a full board. But then there won't be an X on the card. Don't worry, I have come up with a solution, though it would require a small adjustment in flavor. Instead of having the spell token and golem token, you could make it say "Secret: After your opponent casts a spell, spend their excess mana. They get Armor equal to twice the mana spent." and you could change the name from "Forced Summoning" to "Forced Casting".

@DestroyerR, I would say this is a dumb joke card and don't submit it, but I can see you already have so, best of luck brother.

@Valor1204, If you think the effect is too wordy or weird you could change it to "deal excess damage to a random enemy minion". I would also reduce the cost to 2 mana given that [Hearthstone Card (unwillign sacrifice) Not Found] is a card.

@BloodMefist, Corpse Explosion isn't legal because the X can't be part of the cards name. If you want to use Corpse Explosion then I am sure there is a way you could adjust the effect a little to get the word "extra" to fit. I don't think Terrorguard Devastator is the right card to go with because I feel like the effect is really obvious and we are going to see a lot of cards like this. Dark Harvest is a super interesting Heal card. And while it looks really good on paper, remember that we had a very similar card with Dark Pact and that was only used in a single deck and mainly because it was 1 mana. Also, I can't imagine a reason to run this over Plague of Flames.

@anchorm4n, There was a card just like yours a while back, only it was a Legendary minion and a 5 mana 5/6. It made it to the finalists with an impressive 3.5, but then got a score of 2.8 in the finalists. If history is any indication, I don't think this card will win.

@TheHoax91, I really like Aldor Artificer for a few reasons. It is simple, it is a playable card, and it uses the X in a way that feels natural. I would bump it up to a 3/3 though just because I think that would look more even, playing a 3 mana 2/3 just feels kind of bad. However, I don't think many people would care about that as much as I do.

@MrRhapsody, I agree with anchorm4n that you should use the "family friendly" version but keep the name Abusive Mistress. Nobody will get upset if your succubus is wearing clothes, but it might offend someone if she is practically naked. As for the card itself, I would both increase the Health by one or two, and also increase the damage by one or two. It is tricky because you don't want it to deal so little damage that it won't every hurt itself, but you also don't want it to deal so much damage that it dies just about every time. Play around with the numbers and see what people like.

@meisterz39, I am not sure if this effect is worth being 6 mana and legendary. It does have the potential to deal a lot of damage, but it would take so much setup from both sides of the board that this card would be unplayable. I would reduce the rarity, and also either reduce the cost or tag the effect onto a minion. Also, don't forget the wattermark!

@Cg8889, This is a risky card. Either people will think this is super awesome and give it 4/5 stars, or they will think it is too OP/unrealistic and give it 1 star. In my opinion, simpler cards that are easier to evaluate are better because people can get a better sense of how powerful the card is and feel more comfortable with their vote. About the balance, I would make it 4 mana or maybe a 5 mana and slightly adjust the stats. Getting an extra Hero Power can provide a lot of extra value and flexibility. Infinite value is scary.

Cg8889: You might have to shuffle an extra copy into your deck instead to avoid the infinite Mechwarper combos.

bigcums: Light Infusion could be worded better (maybe limit it to minions and "gain +1/+1 for each excess health". Light Burst should be higher since targeting a minion with full health is basically a double Flamestrike.

anchorm4n: I like the Protector, and I don't think putting it in Witchwood is much of a problem since Year of the Raven was when Treat support became a thing. But 5 Mana would definitely be more balanced.

KANSAS: I think the six Coins is pretty forced, I don't know if this idea will work for the competition.

CursedParrot: I think the Violet Spellshielder would be more readable if it used Overkill in some way. Maybe "If you Overkill a minion with a spell, gain Armor equal to the excess damage."

MenacingBagel: I think that works, just make sure to include a token of the Improvised Explosives when you submit.

BloodMefist: I'd go with the Corpse Explosion out of the three.

meisterz39: I like it, not much else to say about it.

MrRhapsody: I'd go with the family-friendly one since that's the direction Hearthstone is going in.

TheHoax91: Aldor Artificer is too simple, but I also think Felo'melorn might be too complicated.

Valor1204: Maybe it would read better if it only shifted once?

DestroyerR: Too much of a meme to be pulled off well.

Pokeniner: Is the damage randomly split? Because otherwise this should be at least 4 Mana.

grumpymonk: Bestow Faith works, but Keeper Remulos would break the entire game.

Demonxz95: I'd go with Soul Enchantress out of the two.

linkblade91: I like Plague Doctor the best of the two, I'm surprised they didn't bring back the Toxins before this.

MenacingBagel: This Chu seem almost seems too good imo.  It can chain super hard with Cast When Drawn effects, which while fringe, feels exceptionally bad and un-interactive on the receiving end.  I think the older effect with a 5/4 stateline or maybe Taunt ("I am in your way").  

CursedParrot: I like the Epic version of Violet Spellshielder that was included with Lyris.  Reminds me of Arcane Artificer without being as overbearing as the later versions.

anchorm4n: I dig the card, always like to see new ways for Treant synergy.  I agree with bumping it to 5 mana since he's basically Consecrate+ and a 2/4 Taunt.

bigcums: Bigger fan of Light Infusion than Light Burst.  Light Burst is too easy to get as a 6+ damage nuke by targeting a Silver Hand Recruit.  Light Infusion might also be a tad too strong in its current form, but I think lowering the heal to 5 puts it in a pretty good spot.

cg8889: Already seems like you're designing a new card to replace Murlox, which is good since it definitely broke Wild (well, added to the Mechwarper problem).  It also feels like a forced 'x' since it could have read 'Add a copy' without pushing in 'extra'.

Hordaki: Got an 'x' to show up on both cards while feeling natural, nice.  I dig the effect too, feels very in-flavor without stepping on the toes of existing Xavius.  I have my biases against DH and the notion of giving them another way around Taunt worries me, but its too slow for tempo, so it should be fine.  I do also like the build-around idea of getting as few of your own minions transformed as possible.

Kansas: Unfortunately this card is neither interesting nor has the required 'x'.  Sad to see you move away from the original excess damage generating coins, I really liked that effect.  The flavor was off on a dentist, but I think it works very well on a different flavor.

MrRhapsody: I think this is a good middle-ground design.  I also question Hearthstone's supposed kid-friendly approach ever since Mistress of Blades got revealed.  Still not completely sold on the effect and it does feel a bit weird how it can just kill itself.  Demonxz95 brought up a good point about the flavor not quite being there.

Pokeniner: Thought the old effect was fine, but I like the new one a lot more.  It adds room for interesting decision making from both sides.  I think it is a bit dangerous to give a magnetic minion such high attack and think the card would still be fine at 3/1 to match Replicating Menace.