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Wailor

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Wow, two in a row :0

Impressive!

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I've been dealing with a family Covid situation, on top of it being Christmas week, so while I've poked my head in on occasion I haven't made the time to sit down and provide feedback until now; sorry about that.

I'm very sorry to hear that. I hope everything turns out to …

I've just discovered there's another expansion with the same theme as this one called Gunslingers of Westfall, which was published 10 months ago on this site.

Besides the setting (which is basically the same), there are many other similarities like the name of my keyword appearing on the title or the fact they also have a 2/6 minion …

New version which tries to correct the main issues the previous iteration had: bad art and being weak.

I gave it a 3/2 statline because it's what raptors tend to have ([card]Bloodfen Raptor[/card], [card]Crackling Razormaw[/card], [card]Mark of the Loa[/card]), but it might be a bit over the top right now.

I would've like to use the puns …

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Dormant appears in four sets beyond Ashes of Outland:

  1. Journey to Un'Goro, with [card]Sherazin, Corpse Flower[/card];
  2. Kobolds & Catacombs, with [card]The Darkness[/card];
  3. Rise of Shadows, with [card]Lucentbark[/card];
  4. Scholomance Academy, with a specific [card]Transfer Student[/card] outcome.

In my opinion, that's too many sets to be considered a one-off mechanic …

My card was supposed to be a joke, but it received relatively good feedback, so I dunno... I think I'll just repost it along my two variations of my more serious card.

I'm not sure if the parenthesised part of the Rogue one (pun not intended) is worded correctly.


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linkblade91

[spoiler]Not sure if …

I mean, it is about the same power level as the actual Freeze Shaman cards, so 🤷🏼‍♂️

(Even if they're from different sets, this card is actually a decent follow up for [card]Living Dragonbreath[/card])

My first idea. It's kinda lame and hard to balance, so I'll probably try with something else.

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Wailor - The Boogeymonster is garbage, so anything better than that is alright in my book lel. "(T)he Kidnapper" is a weird direction to take him, and Priest is especially weird flavor-wise, but mechanically it makes sense...I think? There are no Priest minions with Rush, IIRC, unless you count that one Lackey. I like the …

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Demonxz95

[spoiler]I agree with DestroyerR in that Whizbang the Whimsical would make more sense as a Random Deck button.

Captain Patches is a bit bland, but ultimately quite alright and definetly more balanced than his first incarnation.[/spoiler]

linkblade91

[spoiler]Very interesting twist on [card]Lynessa Sunsorrow[/card], both flavor and gameplay-wise.[/spoiler]

Okay, I've found an idea I'm quite satisfied with, but I'm not sure if the execution is right.

Same stats as [card]The Boogeymonster[/card], but has now Rush to make use of his effect right away. Since it has a Steal/Silence effect, I gave it to Priest.

I'll try to give feedback later.

Not really convinced by any of these but whatevs.

AF Kay's effect is basically a custom card I made years ago based on one friend who is always late btw 🙂

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Finally, I'd like to ask how to create a custom watermark, like the Sun mark Demonxz95 used for their space expansion.

http://www.hearthcards.net/setsandclasses/#3875-%3E%3E%3EEmblems-

Check out this link. Click on a card to get its code.

If you see a watermark you want, then you type that …

Disclaimer: This expansion is still in a very early stage. Some artworks are awfully bad and certain cards might not be balanced or present a faulty concept in the first place. Feedback is very welcome, no matter if it's about balance, grammar or artwork.

One of my main focuses was flavor, so if you don't understand some of …

The once decaying region of Westfall is now flooded with people of all sorts and a large stream of stagecoaches that travels busily around the land. The reason? Gold, of course!

This sudden gold rush has attracted a lot of greedy visitors, including some gun-wielding outlaws. This is something the authorities of Stormwind cannot tolerate, so they have sent …

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KANSAS

[spoiler]Durability should be capitalized. Appart from that, I'm not sure about having both the Battlecry and the Deathrattle. They don't seem very cohesive besides having Freeze synergy.[/spoiler]

 

Do you think it would work better if the effect interacted with something else …

I've scraped Mirror Mace, so I'll focus on Soul Eater instead. What do you think about the new wording? I think it's more accurate, but also blander in some way.

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grumpymonk

[spoiler]If you can't figure out how to work around the [card]Blackwater Buccaneer[/card] issue, I think [card]Blackwater Buccaneer[/card] is also neat.[/spoiler]

DalvanKillder

[spoiler]Very …

Very cool expansion, really enjoyed it.

Bump of my previous cards (which people seem very divided about) and a new idea.

Also, I'm kinda surprised to see that several people seemed to think the first version doesn't fit Priest, since copying stuff has always been their thing. I mean, it's a weapon, but that's why it's also part Paladin...


Pokeniner

[spoiler]A …

Here's my first idea, which... Kinda breaks the rules (but so does [card]Molten Blade[/card], so I guess it's fine).

The card is supposed to be a pun on mirror maze. The first one is more fitting in terms of class identity, while the second one allows me to put it in Darkmoon (which makes sense, because of the …