Wow, this theme sounds quite cool, but I've never struggled to find good art that much before. With all the Vulperas already around and the stage time Tortollans have gotten via Turtle Mage, I decided to go with the Furbolgs. I found the Polar version especially handsome and managed to dig up some art in a dark corner which hopefully qualifies. So here goes:
Pretty straight forward. Ursa are elite Furbolgs that are strong enough to battle Dragons, therefore the stats. "Enrage" was a key Warrior mechanic in KotfT and I figured it fits the art - you really shouldn't provoke a Polar Furbolg.
I'm still trying my best to #makehunterwinawcdc, but it was very hard to come up with something this week. I decided to design what Abominable Bowman should have been in the first place.
Not very happy with either of them, so feedback is very appreciated.
Here are my thoughts on your cards:
Nirast
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The art of Totom might be a bit too dark for HS. The effect is interesting enough. Rejoin the Group has way better art but I don't get that much Tortollan flavor to be honest.
RealJC1234TheToonist
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I feel you, this is so hard. You should change the watermark and I'm not sure if this isn't more of a Paladin card than Hunter, but I won't juge you too hard on this since hand-buffing has become a Hunter thing as well.
Este
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Welcome, nice to have you here! You have an interesting idea, but there are some people around here that will deduct a point for using art that is already in the game.
KingKuba
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Simple, strong, versatile. I like it!
Wailor
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Very cool card, lots of flavor there. I can't say which version I prefer right now, both of them look very interesting.
FieselFitz
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The art looks rather Warlock-y to me. Nice find, this has a lot of potential!
Arkasaur
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Palace Skulker is an interesting idea, but I'm not sure if enough people will remember Kingsbane and realize that keeping enchantments isn't a strictly Paladin thing. I like the bounce mechanic!
Valor1204
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Solid card, but not very exciting.
BloodMefist
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Cool idea! I prefer the Back Alley Researcher.
Inconspicousaurus
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Very flavorful! The one thing I have to ciritize is that the main card's art is already in the game.
DavnanKillder
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I like your card. It misses a period at the end of the text.
KANSAS
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I like your idea, but yeah, the wording is a bit off. Why not go all in and make it "Draw an Elemental and a Murloc from your deck."?
grumpymonk
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Nice card! Nothing to criticize from my side.
Pokeniner
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I think the coloring of your card might make it a better fit for Paladin. Everything else is fine.
Cg8889
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Nice card! Make it cost 1 and you're fine.
linkblade
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You'll get an extra star for managing to create a Demon Hunter Tortollan from me. This is hilarious! I prefer the Epic but yes, you should remove the Taunt. Great idea!
Demon
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Cool idea! This might be very scary in Wild, but it's a neat card for Standard.
The problem I had with Fresh Apple is the fact that it uses art that's already used by another collectible card in the game (in the same expansion too, no less): Witchwood Apple.
Considering this and the fact that Carrot Muncher uses the classic watermark and has a spelling error ("health" should be capitalized), I'm even more surprised about some rather promising cards not showing up in the finals. The transparency report will be very interesting this week. Maybe we can draw some conclussions from this.
I'm not very happy with this week's results. None of my favorites made it - where are Friendly Barkeep and Slice and Dice? Neither did we manage to get a Hunter card to the finals once more. Sigh. Anyway, good luck to the finalists!
Man, I actually checked all the "scarlet" cards but dismissed them because I misunderstood Dermostatic's last message. So I did mention Jaffa the city and the hint at scarlet first but failed to make the connection. Yeah, teamwork!
A color that fits fever and letter is scarlet (scarlet fever is a sickness and The Scarlet Letter is a famous book). Sounds fitting since there's the Scarlet Crusade in WoW.
Now I'm almost completely ignorant of WoW lore but Google also told me that there's a Scarlet Monastery. One of its former leaders was High Inquisitor Whitemane. I know that's a bit far fetched but I don't know what a "scarlet mayor" could be otherwise. Any WoW experts around?
So... an urban Jaffa might be a mayor? That would be Mayor Noggenfogger, but Dermostatic said those two refer to the second word in the card's name. I think we need another hint.
Hey guys and gals, I figured it might be cool to talk about our favorite books, recommend each other hidden gems and keep up to date with promising releases.
For starters, I'd like to let you know that I'm rooting for Science Fiction and Fantasy (big surprise) and everything in between since I've been given the Lord of the Rings as a present on my 10th birthday. Here are some of the titles I'd like to recommend to anyone with a similar taste:
Dan Simmons: The Hyperion Cantos (4 books) My favorite Sci-Fi books. Don't be fooled by the first book, it's primarily a set up for the main story which takes place in books 2-4. There's space craft, there's AI, there's an epic love story and if you feel rather sceptic about religion, this is a great book for you.
Eliezer Yudkowsky a.k.a Less Wrong: Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality Yes, this is a fan fiction. But please hear me out: This is probably the best book I've ever read. The basic question of the book is what Harry Potter would have acted like if he was a (very) intelligent, grown up, modern person. At times it's hillarious, all of it is exciting, and last but not least: it's free. You can read or download the book at www.hpmor.com - I actually went to the lenghts of taking this to a copy shop and having it bound for 80 € because it is so, so great.
David Mack - Dark Arts series (currently 3 books) This is another series about magicians, but with an interesting twist to the usual pattern: the magicians are yoking demons to perform magic for them. The storys of the first and the second book are taking place during the Second Wolrd War with magic users on both sides. It's way darker than HP in all kind of ways. A good example is the yoking of demons which is mentally exhausting to the point that all major magic users are addicted to alcohol, cocaine or other drugs because they'd lose their mind otherwise.
Terry Goodkind - The Sword of Truth series (main plot ends after book 11) One of my favorite fantasy series, The Sword of Truth is a great story about ethics and morale, set in a world full of magic and magical creatures. It has its lengths but never lost its relevance for me, since it colorfully describes what happens if narrowminded, intolerant people gain the upper hand with the help of a very powerful leader. This is adult material as well - there's quite some cruelty and while the sex scenes themselves are scarce and not detailed at all, the teasing which leads to them certainly isn't. [In my personal opinion, you should start with "Wizard's first rule" and most importantly stop after "Confessor". All the other sequels were just an attempt to milk the cow to death.]
I have chosen to showcase those 4 because my other favorites are rather well known and don't need to be promoted very much imho. Among them are the "Foundation" series by Asimov, the "Ender" series by Orson Scott Card, "The Forever War" by Haldeman and "The Parafaith War" by Modesitt Jr.
High places on my next to read list are taken by "To sleep in a sea of stars" by Paolini and "The Name of the Wind" by Rothfuss (if he ever manages to finish book 3 of the series). I am entertaining the thought to try Jordan's "Wheel of Time" series for a third (or fourth?) time. I've never managed to get past book 4 because he's all about character development and I prefer faster plots.
What are your favorites? Is there anything you'd like to advertice in particular? Something you're looking forward to? Please tell!
Nice changes, I really like the flavor. Maybe the stats are a bit too much? This might be nitpicking, but I would be more comfortable at 5 Health.
BloodMefist
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I agree with Demon, the full art is way better. I know that I criticized this in my first feedback, but the chance for other classes to get some AOE with a drawback is actually quite cool, so I'd prefer this to stay a Neutral. Cool card!
bananenparty
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I don't know what's rong with the art, it looks like there's another picture in the background. Is that intended? It's an interesting effect to be sure, but probably not realistic enough to win this competition.
bigcums
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This is way better than the first card. The effect fits the art if you look close enough to see the eyes on the plate. I like it. I'm no native speaker but I'm pretty sure it's supposed to be "its" rather than "it's" in both cases. Finally, the Scholomance vibes aren't very strong. I'd use a custom watermark.
Yeah, Secret Door also immediately made me think of Second Dinner. They sound suspiciously alike - any chance they're working together? And while we're at it: Has Second Dinner brought anything forth since their founding? How long does it usually take a studio to at least announce what they're working on?
Thanks for your feedback! Linkblade and Demon thought I could get away with a 3 Mana cost. I would like to avoid that since this slot is really crowded in Hunter. 4 Mana also avoids Unleash the Hounds into double Sharing the Spoils which is relevant because of the other change I made: I raised the buff to +2/+2. Since I also changed my mind about this not being able to target heros in favor of flexibility, here's the new version of the card:
I hope this is a little more exciting for y'all. I'm pretty fond of the flavor, even if the art looks rather relaxed in comparism to your usual ferocious Hunter card. What do you think?
Next round of feedback:
bigcums
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I think the text misses a target for the Health gain. You probably mean "to your hero". I don't feel the flavor very much, though. Is Rexxar supposed to eat his dead animal companions?
FieselFitz
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Nice one, your good to go imho.
Neoguli
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I still think you should store that super cool effect away and try to come up with something new for this week.
KANSAS
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Nice idea! The statline is okay for me and it's fine as a Neutral.
DestroyerR
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Cool idea, I like the effect being triggered by the number of tokens on the board. The puns are great! Two issues for me: 1) Rush is a bit wasted on the Iron Horde Chef since its appearance will usually be triggered by your opponent. 2) 7 Mana do nothing might not be enough for a legendary spell. You might want to give the Aspiring Chefs Rush and tune down the Iron Horde Chef a bit.
DavnanKillder
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On Deadly Banquet the text should probably read "… who attacked your hero last turn". The Apple Seller looks a bit more flavorful to me, though. You should give this one another watermark and add an "n" to "an enemy minion". If possible, also edit the text so there's no single word left in the last line.
GameTheory345
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Nice idea, but maybe a bit too creative. I don't think a card with that many tokens will make it very far even if it was possible to submit them, which I doubt.
Inconspicuosaurus
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Nice art and perfect flavor for Scholomance. I'm not completely sold on the effect, though. To further add to the flavor, you could make this a Warrior card that summons a Piranha for every damaged (enemy?) minion - their blood draws them to the battlefield, you see? You'd have to be careful not to step on Troublemaker's toes in this case. Maybe "Summon a 2/1 Piranha with Rush for every damaged enemy minion."? Anyway, you really should create a token card for your submission!
Cg8889
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I'm sorry but thi is just too strong for my taste. I also hate Zeph with a passion, but he at least has a condition. Your card offers almost perfect tutoring without a drawback. If you stick to it, you should check if it shouldn't read "unspent" mana instead of "unused".
Whelp! I really didn't want to give people a headache with the theme. There had been an interesting No Neutrals card in the WCDC the week before which wasn't Paladin and I got curious what would come out if we focused on that effect. Turns out there's a reason why Blizz hasn't given those cards to all the classes. Really great results nevertheless. I rated all the finalists 4 or 5 stars.
Pokeniner - Now that's a great joke with the name and the art. The effect is neat, although I am slightly worried that it would end up going the same route as Roll the Bones.
BloodMefist - A brilliant reference to the real life Gordon Ramsay, and a smart usage of an existing WoW NPC. The flavor (and that pun is going to keep happening whether I want it to or not) is pretty on-point too. I'd say this is pretty good.
Neoguli - A completely fair enough card by itself, but it seems extremely out of place in theme. Any possible reference to cooking or eating you could mangle from this will not be obvious enough for a lot of people when it comes to voting.
Anchorm4n - Ah, I remember when Big Game Hunter was meta. Conflicting times, conflicting times. Your card seems fine to me. Actually, something somewhat hilarious is imagining a Deep Sea Predator eating another Deep Sea Predator.
TheHoax91 - A flavorful (hahahahahahahahahahahahaha) representation of Patchwork with a neat effect, although depending on how specific "phases" of combat work, it might be hard to use the effect properly since it has 4 Health.
JackJimson - I think the proper text would be "Give your Beasts Immune this turn, then they attack a random enemy minion. If they kill any, they gain Health equal to the damage dealt". This however would end up being 5 lines of text with no convenient way to short it enough, so you're best off with a different card instead.
FieselFitz - I enjoy the second version much more than the first. I think it's a solid interpretation of the effect. I'm not sure how good it would be in comparison to Underbelly Angler, but that card was a mistake to being with.
Inconspicuosaurus - I feel like the card is probably too weak. I'd say you could probably make it 4 mana. Based on Nethrandamus, I feel like you could probably use "Upgrades each time a friendly minion dies" for the upgrade part. That said, the card itself is pretty hilarious in terms of the connection between the name, art, and effect, which I really like.
DavnanKillder - Deadly Banquet seems fine for a Rogue Secret, although the flavor feels off. In this situation, normally only person is the target for murder (the owner of the establishment where the gathering in question is taking place). Innocent Apple Seller is a fine reference to Snow White, although judging by how Corruption is not played, I feel like this wouldn't either.
Thanks! How do you like the Hunter spell though (a few posts downward on page 2)? I think it fits the theme much better.
I like Conjure Food because of the lore background you've provided. Maybe you can find better art for it?
FieselFitz
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If it was my card I'd drop the Scholomance watermark and go for a custom one. The card doesn't relate to Scholomance and some people will punish you for this (including me). I'd also toy around with the text to see if you can manage to avoid the single word in the last line ("orphan").
If the art in the teaser is the one we'll get, I might actually use it instead of the 1.000 wins portrait. That's how bad the latter is.
Wow, this theme sounds quite cool, but I've never struggled to find good art that much before. With all the Vulperas already around and the stage time Tortollans have gotten via Turtle Mage, I decided to go with the Furbolgs. I found the Polar version especially handsome and managed to dig up some art in a dark corner which hopefully qualifies. So here goes:
Pretty straight forward. Ursa are elite Furbolgs that are strong enough to battle Dragons, therefore the stats. "Enrage" was a key Warrior mechanic in KotfT and I figured it fits the art - you really shouldn't provoke a Polar Furbolg.
I'm still trying my best to #makehunterwinawcdc, but it was very hard to come up with something this week. I decided to design what Abominable Bowman should have been in the first place.
Not very happy with either of them, so feedback is very appreciated.
Here are my thoughts on your cards:
Nirast
RealJC1234TheToonist
Este
KingKuba
Wailor
FieselFitz
Arkasaur
Valor1204
BloodMefist
Inconspicousaurus
DavnanKillder
KANSAS
grumpymonk
Pokeniner
Cg8889
linkblade
Demon
Congrats to Sinth!
I do actually think that KANSAS is right and art carries you farther than it could be expected.
Is it Ironbark Protector?
Edit: That would be too obvious, my guess is Ironwood Golem.
Considering this and the fact that Carrot Muncher uses the classic watermark and has a spelling error ("health" should be capitalized), I'm even more surprised about some rather promising cards not showing up in the finals. The transparency report will be very interesting this week. Maybe we can draw some conclussions from this.
I'm not very happy with this week's results. None of my favorites made it - where are Friendly Barkeep and Slice and Dice? Neither did we manage to get a Hunter card to the finals once more. Sigh. Anyway, good luck to the finalists!
Man, I actually checked all the "scarlet" cards but dismissed them because I misunderstood Dermostatic's last message. So I did mention Jaffa the city and the hint at scarlet first but failed to make the connection. Yeah, teamwork!
A color that fits fever and letter is scarlet (scarlet fever is a sickness and The Scarlet Letter is a famous book). Sounds fitting since there's the Scarlet Crusade in WoW.
Now I'm almost completely ignorant of WoW lore but Google also told me that there's a Scarlet Monastery. One of its former leaders was High Inquisitor Whitemane. I know that's a bit far fetched but I don't know what a "scarlet mayor" could be otherwise. Any WoW experts around?
Thanks a lot! I've added the Ender's Shadow and the First Law series to my wish list for the time being. So much to read, so little time.
I cannot stress enough how great hpmor is - just try the first chapter, it's free and only two clicks away ;-)
So... an urban Jaffa might be a mayor? That would be Mayor Noggenfogger, but Dermostatic said those two refer to the second word in the card's name. I think we need another hint.
Thanks, that sounds very interesting. Closed has become a hard criterion for me. What are your favorites?
Hey guys and gals, I figured it might be cool to talk about our favorite books, recommend each other hidden gems and keep up to date with promising releases.
For starters, I'd like to let you know that I'm rooting for Science Fiction and Fantasy (big surprise) and everything in between since I've been given the Lord of the Rings as a present on my 10th birthday. Here are some of the titles I'd like to recommend to anyone with a similar taste:
Dan Simmons: The Hyperion Cantos (4 books)
My favorite Sci-Fi books. Don't be fooled by the first book, it's primarily a set up for the main story which takes place in books 2-4. There's space craft, there's AI, there's an epic love story and if you feel rather sceptic about religion, this is a great book for you.
Eliezer Yudkowsky a.k.a Less Wrong: Harry Potter and the Methods of Rationality
Yes, this is a fan fiction. But please hear me out: This is probably the best book I've ever read. The basic question of the book is what Harry Potter would have acted like if he was a (very) intelligent, grown up, modern person. At times it's hillarious, all of it is exciting, and last but not least: it's free. You can read or download the book at www.hpmor.com - I actually went to the lenghts of taking this to a copy shop and having it bound for 80 € because it is so, so great.
David Mack - Dark Arts series (currently 3 books)
This is another series about magicians, but with an interesting twist to the usual pattern: the magicians are yoking demons to perform magic for them. The storys of the first and the second book are taking place during the Second Wolrd War with magic users on both sides. It's way darker than HP in all kind of ways. A good example is the yoking of demons which is mentally exhausting to the point that all major magic users are addicted to alcohol, cocaine or other drugs because they'd lose their mind otherwise.
Terry Goodkind - The Sword of Truth series (main plot ends after book 11)
One of my favorite fantasy series, The Sword of Truth is a great story about ethics and morale, set in a world full of magic and magical creatures. It has its lengths but never lost its relevance for me, since it colorfully describes what happens if narrowminded, intolerant people gain the upper hand with the help of a very powerful leader. This is adult material as well - there's quite some cruelty and while the sex scenes themselves are scarce and not detailed at all, the teasing which leads to them certainly isn't.
[In my personal opinion, you should start with "Wizard's first rule" and most importantly stop after "Confessor". All the other sequels were just an attempt to milk the cow to death.]
I have chosen to showcase those 4 because my other favorites are rather well known and don't need to be promoted very much imho. Among them are the "Foundation" series by Asimov, the "Ender" series by Orson Scott Card, "The Forever War" by Haldeman and "The Parafaith War" by Modesitt Jr.
High places on my next to read list are taken by "To sleep in a sea of stars" by Paolini and "The Name of the Wind" by Rothfuss (if he ever manages to finish book 3 of the series). I am entertaining the thought to try Jordan's "Wheel of Time" series for a third (or fourth?) time. I've never managed to get past book 4 because he's all about character development and I prefer faster plots.
What are your favorites? Is there anything you'd like to advertice in particular? Something you're looking forward to? Please tell!
KANSAS
BloodMefist
bananenparty
bigcums
This is really tough. Lets try to pick it apart.
Letter - could be a that archaic form of e-mails that usually contains bills or other bad news; or: a part of the alphabet
fever - first associations are sick(ness) and hot
Jaffa - I actually had to google this. It's a former city in Israel, being part of Tel-Aviv today. There are also Jaffa-oranges and -cakes.
Urban - first associations are city, town. But there were also no less than 8 popes of that name.
It might not be important, but I noticed that Letter, Jaffa and Urban are written with capital letters while fever isn't.
Heed these words to pull back the curtain - immediate association is One Night in Karazhan
So far I haven't been able to put the pieces together. Maybe we should all go back to giving reasons for our guesses so we can work it out together?
Yeah, Secret Door also immediately made me think of Second Dinner. They sound suspiciously alike - any chance they're working together? And while we're at it: Has Second Dinner brought anything forth since their founding? How long does it usually take a studio to at least announce what they're working on?
Thanks for your feedback! Linkblade and Demon thought I could get away with a 3 Mana cost. I would like to avoid that since this slot is really crowded in Hunter. 4 Mana also avoids Unleash the Hounds into double Sharing the Spoils which is relevant because of the other change I made: I raised the buff to +2/+2. Since I also changed my mind about this not being able to target heros in favor of flexibility, here's the new version of the card:
I hope this is a little more exciting for y'all. I'm pretty fond of the flavor, even if the art looks rather relaxed in comparism to your usual ferocious Hunter card. What do you think?
Next round of feedback:
bigcums
FieselFitz
Neoguli
KANSAS
DestroyerR
DavnanKillder
GameTheory345
Inconspicuosaurus
Cg8889
Whelp! I really didn't want to give people a headache with the theme. There had been an interesting No Neutrals card in the WCDC the week before which wasn't Paladin and I got curious what would come out if we focused on that effect. Turns out there's a reason why Blizz hasn't given those cards to all the classes. Really great results nevertheless. I rated all the finalists 4 or 5 stars.
Thanks! How do you like the Hunter spell though (a few posts downward on page 2)? I think it fits the theme much better.
BasilAnguis
FieselFitz